you should know who i am but if you don`t..i think it`s great!!i love the story but it has no intro no way to figure out what is happening Report Review
It's good, I like the concept. However, time for constructive criticism; It's too short for one chapter. Too short. I'd eleborate on her apearance abit so it's easier to visualize. I'd also elaborate on those two boys. I'm not sure who they are or what pupose they serve. The dream could also be lengthened. I think with the right details, it could be an amazing story. Anyways, that's it for now, Miss co-writer my my fanfic! Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the critism...I'm putting it to good use. But I did elaborate on the two boys, and I told you who they were and what the purpose was. So I don't understand what else I need to do? Report Review
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