RAWR*&@Q*(@$&*@#%&(@#* cough update?? please?? PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY AND WHIP CREAM AND COOKIE CRUMBLES ON TOP! Come on you know you can't resist the cookie crumbles. Barely anyone can. Hell I can't, yes I admit it I can't resist the cookie crumbles. I'm rambling... You've got me rambling...That's never good cause the only way for me to stop rambling is to... UPDATE! Report Review
very confusing, you shouldn't change narrators like that. Report Review
OMG! what happened to harry!?! I hope he isnt dead!Author's Response: don't worry, i wouldn't let him die yet. keep reviewing! Report Review
your stories are great but i often get confused on who is talking could you maybe put whose POV it is before you change the POV and you never mentioned who exactly said "You dar breathe a word..." because i thought it was harry but other than those few and very minor problems your story is a real pleasure to read and btw i dont have a fanfiction so i dont know if you can reply just hurry with the next chapter!Author's Response: yeah i can reply and don't worry i'll post again. sorry about the confusing thing but once i've finished the story i'm planning on editing it. thanks for the review! Report Review
yowch...Author's Response: thanks for the review! Report Review
Ciara the banner isn't there.
Emmalena: Tell Harry his dad's going to take him out to see his old house if he's good.
Remeus: Lia and Shawn you are welcome to meet Luke's older twins if you wish. Report Review
GREAT!!!^_^!!!Author's Response: thank you! i'v updated again so review if you can! Report Review
Aww, she had a hangover and a screaming banshee outside. What a lovely way to start the day!Author's Response: lol thank you! review again! Report Review
Well Ciara its brill so update!Author's Response: thank u!!! turns out due to a slight miscalculation, that chapter you wanted to see will now be chapter 27... lol sorry Report Review
Nathinal! Or how ever you spell it! Don't they make a cute couple, Lia and Harry?!?!?Author's Response: aw, yeh they do! yay! u got the answer! Report Review
i could not understand the censored of what you are saying..can you explain me who is the narrator atleastAuthor's Response: urm, well, on 1 chapter it's Lia, and the next chapter is harry, and it continues on like that... it's hard 2 explain. and u get chapters which aren't narrated by anyone, or are narrated by not Lia or Harry... yeh. evn i'm confused. by the way, i'm laughing at ur outburst Report Review
i love your storyAuthor's Response: thnx, i luv it 2. lol. thanx! keep readin Report Review
AHAHAHAHA WHY DID MOLLY CUT HIS HAIr?!!!Author's Response: Lia- i dunno! Harry, y did Molly cut ur hair? hope u like the story Report Review
awesomeAuthor's Response: i aim to please *bows* Report Review
ur stories are really cooolAuthor's Response: wow! thanks!!! keep reading! Report Review
I really wish this site had notices for when someone updates a story...
This was a great! Granger dosn't seem to like Lia at all! George and the fire whisky, Molly must have a good swinging arm from those two. Sorry if this review is kinda blah, I've been working in chapter 14 since four o'clock this afternoon.Author's Response: yup, too lazy to log in is just about right. thanx for reviewing, please do again soon! Byezie! Report Review
hello i like your story very much and love the fact that the chapters are long and there are many chapters.i startedmy own story called harry potter and Voldermorts lair.if you can please read and review it.i would be a very happy and now temporarily sick with broncitis teenager.
signed geckogirl (age 13)Author's Response: hope u get well! i'll try and read in a bit, first i gotta update! i'll review, too! thnks billions for the comments and review, luv yaz! Byezie! Report Review
Dude im totally loving this story.....great stuff i tell ya. But u gotta write more, u cant leave me hanging like this. I really enjoy reading this story and since i have no life....you gotta finish it. thanx! :)Author's Response: i'm just about to update, so hang in there! you gotta have a life somewhere! thank you tons and tons for this review, Byezie! Report Review
Mione dosn't seem to like Lia does she? *sniff* Poor Ginny...I'm going to miss her. And cute little Harry and Lia, they make a cute couple already!!
Keep up the good work, sweetie! Your doing an excellent job!Author's Response: Lia- i know! poor Giny! don't kill me for it. thanks so much for this review! Byezie! Report Review
VERY VERY VERY GOOD!!! I wish I could finish this now, but I have to do my homework... This story is just so excellent! Hermione is being a little protective, isn't that nice...
Keep up the great job, hun! Sorry it took me so long to review and I'll try and finish it later after I do my math. Cheers! Report Review
Yay!! Excellent!! *sniff*I miss Padfoot. This story is excellent! Not to beg, but could you review my new chapter of 'A Darker Dream'? Keep up the good work!!Author's Response: i've read it, and it's good. i haven't reviewed it yet, but will do. thanks! Byezie!!! Report Review
I love your story. Its really good.I will look forward to reading more. Great Job!! ~~~~Quillian91~~~~~~Author's Response: thank you. keep r/ring, Byezie! Report Review
Go Vamp girl!!! I can't spell her name yet, give me time. I really liked this chapter! It gave off some information that was needed. I really like how you are making your Oc's. Just a simple question that has been nagging at me. How can she go out in the sun with out gettin fried?
Keep up the good work, sweetie! Your a very talented author and don't let anyone tell you otherwise!!~Amanda(Selene)Author's Response: Lots of reviews from u. which is good. it's Xylia, i cn barely spell it either. um, i'll tell u all about wot she can and can;t do in chapters to come. thanks for the coments. Byezie. Report Review
This house is really, really big. I understand Harry would want to explore the house he dosn't remember. Besides it would be great to be there with his parents friends that could answer what ever question he has. I really like it and it is a happier chapter. Keep the good work up, hun.~Amanda Report Review
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