32 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Lillith_Thalia Interval Three: A werewolf's family

29th December 2007:
RAWR*&@Q*(@$&*@#%&(@#* cough update?? please?? PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY AND WHIP CREAM AND COOKIE CRUMBLES ON TOP! Come on you know you can't resist the cookie crumbles. Barely anyone can. Hell I can't, yes I admit it I can't resist the cookie crumbles. I'm rambling... You've got me rambling...That's never good cause the only way for me to stop rambling is to... UPDATE!

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Review #2, by CuteBrownEyedGirl A mystery Girl...

21st February 2006:
very confusing, you shouldn't change narrators like that.

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Review #3, by CuteBrownEyedGirl A mystery Girl...

21st February 2006:
very confusing, you shouldn't change narrators like that.

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Review #4, by pinaygrl3123 Harry: Avada Kedrava

11th July 2005:
OMG! what happened to harry!?! I hope he isnt dead!

Author's Response: don't worry, i wouldn't let him die yet. keep reviewing!

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Review #5, by mymy Harry: Avada Kedrava

7th July 2005:
your stories are great but i often get confused on who is talking could you maybe put whose POV it is before you change the POV and you never mentioned who exactly said "You dar breathe a word..." because i thought it was harry but other than those few and very minor problems your story is a real pleasure to read and btw i dont have a fanfiction so i dont know if you can reply just hurry with the next chapter!

Author's Response: yeah i can reply and don't worry i'll post again. sorry about the confusing thing but once i've finished the story i'm planning on editing it. thanks for the review!

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Review #6, by pinaygrl3123 25: Lia: Vampire Magic

29th June 2005:
yowch...

Author's Response: thanks for the review!

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Review #7, by EmmalenaGranger A mystery Girl...

15th June 2005:
Ciara the banner isn't there. Emmalena: Tell Harry his dad's going to take him out to see his old house if he's good. Remeus: Lia and Shawn you are welcome to meet Luke's older twins if you wish.

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Review #8, by loco_lou Harry: Old Snapie charms his robes

31st May 2005:
GREAT!!!^_^!!!

Author's Response: thank you! i'v updated again so review if you can!

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Review #9, by Selene Lia- Hangover!

2nd April 2005:
Aww, she had a hangover and a screaming banshee outside. What a lovely way to start the day!

Author's Response: lol thank you! review again!

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Review #10, by EmmalenaGranger Lia- Hangover!

29th March 2005:
Well Ciara its brill so update!

Author's Response: thank u!!! turns out due to a slight miscalculation, that chapter you wanted to see will now be chapter 27... lol sorry

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Review #11, by Selene Imterval two:: rebirth

13th March 2005:
Nathinal! Or how ever you spell it! Don't they make a cute couple, Lia and Harry?!?!?

Author's Response: aw, yeh they do! yay! u got the answer!

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Review #12, by nageshwar@students.iiit.net A mystery Girl...

10th March 2005:
i could not understand the censored of what you are saying..can you explain me who is the narrator atleast

Author's Response: urm, well, on 1 chapter it's Lia, and the next chapter is harry, and it continues on like that... it's hard 2 explain. and u get chapters which aren't narrated by anyone, or are narrated by not Lia or Harry... yeh. evn i'm confused. by the way, i'm laughing at ur outburst

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Review #13, by foggie A mystery Girl...

24th February 2005:
i love your story

Author's Response: thnx, i luv it 2. lol. thanx! keep readin

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Review #14, by tiffie A mystery Girl...

24th February 2005:
AHAHAHAHA WHY DID MOLLY CUT HIS HAIr?!!!

Author's Response: Lia- i dunno! Harry, y did Molly cut ur hair? hope u like the story

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Review #15, by whitestag A mystery Girl...

24th February 2005:
awesome

Author's Response: i aim to please *bows*

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Review #16, by freak Imterval two:: rebirth

24th February 2005:
ur stories are really coool

Author's Response: wow! thanks!!! keep reading!

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Review #17, by Selene(to lazy to log ing) Harry- tall and mysteriouse strangers...

5th November 2004:
I really wish this site had notices for when someone updates a story... This was a great! Granger dosn't seem to like Lia at all! George and the fire whisky, Molly must have a good swinging arm from those two. Sorry if this review is kinda blah, I've been working in chapter 14 since four o'clock this afternoon.

Author's Response: yup, too lazy to log in is just about right. thanx for reviewing, please do again soon! Byezie!

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Review #18, by geckogirl Harrry- new headquaters of the order of the phoenix

12th October 2004:
hello i like your story very much and love the fact that the chapters are long and there are many chapters.i startedmy own story called harry potter and Voldermorts lair.if you can please read and review it.i would be a very happy and now temporarily sick with broncitis teenager. signed geckogirl (age 13)

Author's Response: hope u get well! i'll try and read in a bit, first i gotta update! i'll review, too! thnks billions for the comments and review, luv yaz! Byezie!

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Review #19, by Felina Lia- Problems

6th October 2004:
Dude im totally loving this story.....great stuff i tell ya. But u gotta write more, u cant leave me hanging like this. I really enjoy reading this story and since i have no life....you gotta finish it. thanx! :)

Author's Response: i'm just about to update, so hang in there! you gotta have a life somewhere! thank you tons and tons for this review, Byezie!

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Review #20, by Selene Lia- Problems

4th October 2004:
Mione dosn't seem to like Lia does she? *sniff* Poor Ginny...I'm going to miss her. And cute little Harry and Lia, they make a cute couple already!! Keep up the good work, sweetie! Your doing an excellent job!

Author's Response: Lia- i know! poor Giny! don't kill me for it. thanks so much for this review! Byezie!

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Review #21, by Selene Lia- Diagon Alley

4th October 2004:
VERY VERY VERY GOOD!!! I wish I could finish this now, but I have to do my homework... This story is just so excellent! Hermione is being a little protective, isn't that nice... Keep up the great job, hun! Sorry it took me so long to review and I'll try and finish it later after I do my math. Cheers!

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Review #22, by Selene(i got logged out) Interval One- The Black Place

15th September 2004:
Yay!! Excellent!! *sniff*I miss Padfoot. This story is excellent! Not to beg, but could you review my new chapter of 'A Darker Dream'? Keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: i've read it, and it's good. i haven't reviewed it yet, but will do. thanks! Byezie!!!

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Review #23, by quillian91 Xylia's meeting

19th August 2004:
I love your story. Its really good.I will look forward to reading more. Great Job!! ~~~~Quillian91~~~~~~

Author's Response: thank you. keep r/ring, Byezie!

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Review #24, by Selene Xylia's meeting

10th August 2004:
Go Vamp girl!!! I can't spell her name yet, give me time. I really liked this chapter! It gave off some information that was needed. I really like how you are making your Oc's. Just a simple question that has been nagging at me. How can she go out in the sun with out gettin fried? Keep up the good work, sweetie! Your a very talented author and don't let anyone tell you otherwise!!~Amanda(Selene)

Author's Response: Lots of reviews from u. which is good. it's Xylia, i cn barely spell it either. um, i'll tell u all about wot she can and can;t do in chapters to come. thanks for the coments. Byezie.

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Review #25, by Selene Harrry- new headquaters of the order of the phoenix

10th August 2004:
This house is really, really big. I understand Harry would want to explore the house he dosn't remember. Besides it would be great to be there with his parents friends that could answer what ever question he has. I really like it and it is a happier chapter. Keep the good work up, hun.~Amanda

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