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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by rougette The book

1st June 2009:
Ugh, such a short chapter and hardly any correct punctuation! However, I'm disappointed that this story is Abandoned because I feel that it does have potential. Diamond in the ruff.

I fell you would have more readers if you had a more extensive summary, such as...

"During an ordinary day, Harry finds his father's not-so-ordinary diary. What lays inside it's binding? Only Harry can learn..."

Or something like that. Have fun and please continue if not with this story, then with future writings!

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Review #2, by Padfoot387 The Search

27th October 2005:

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Review #3, by Padfoot387 The book

27th October 2005:
Intersting its a good beingging

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Review #4, by Kaitlyn Longbottom The book

20th July 2004:
good, keep with it!

Author's Response: Thanks

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