I usually don't like Draco, but this was pretty good! Please write more! Report Review
I love this story so far... it is really funny, and I hope that you update soon... so I can read more of it ^_^ Report Review
Great Job so far. I love it. Keep Up the awesome work. Post soon!!!Author's Response: Thank you :) I am glad that you enjoyed it. I'll have more soon as possible. ~Danielle Report Review
Hey, very cute chapter! write next one soon!Author's Response: I will don't worry. But first I have to finish my first story and find time between high school and writing these stories. Well thank you I am glad that you enjoyed it. ~Danielle Report Review
hey, good chapter just a little bit slow for me Report Review
Hey, This was also a good chapter I liked how you make everybody have a different perspective but Draco isn't Mr. Weasleys nephew!Author's Response: he's posing as Author's nephew...Author knows more about the muggle word than Lucius and fits in better than Lucius. Thats why Author had to take Draco to the muggle home. Get it? :) ~Danielle Report Review
Hey, This was a very clever chapter because it was clever to make Draco's thoughts. But I didn't like the gross parts like the bath and the bathroom and when the "hanky pankie". I also don't like the bad words. But those things you can jsut stop.Author's Response: Hey, thanks for reading my story. Sorry about the gross parts, I guess some people may not think that they funny. Don't worry, it won't be too gross, I promise. But Draco curses, not Marylin. Marylin is a little lady, you can say. I won't go too far with the cursing though. I don't like the "f" word or anything too vulgar. The hankie pankie was a clean way of saying...what the parents do in the bedroom. I didn't want to be too descriptive with that part lol (gee maybe I shouldn't say that due to Draco's bathroom scene). But anywho, thanks for reading. Right now I dont have time to write more due to school! Hopefully a new chapter will be up soon. ~Danielle Report Review
awesome i cant wate untill you finish the rest of the story. Report Review
It was a very good story. I'm not done reading it all but its good so far. I give in an 8. Your did good on the discriptions and the names, but i think you put your personal thoughts in the to much, like says draco's hot. Author's Response: Well I am glad that you're enjoying it. Yes, those are my personal thoughts...hehehe. Thank you ~danielle Report Review
that was one of the fanfics EVER please finish the other chapters soon or i'll dieAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'll write more in time. Right now I am working on chapter 9 in my other story. :) Thanks again! ~Danielle Report Review
That's creative how you mixed in muggle doings with the Malfoys--the people who hate muggles. Very nice and interesting! I will be reading! So keep writing! Brilliant, I say--cheersAuthor's Response: Thank you, I am glad that you enjoyed it. I figured Malfoy needs to get over hating muggles and thinking he's so great....so thats why I made the story. Hopefully it's humorous to everyone. :) Thanks! ~Danielle Report Review
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