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Review #1, by Wicked Vixen The Muaruders

28th February 2006:
That was so sad *furiously rubs away tears*. I really loved it. MARAUDERS RAWK!!!

Author's Response: Why thank you, lol.

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Review #2, by centaursh The Muaruders

28th March 2005:
Xcellent, loved every bit of it! =)

Author's Response: That you very very much!!!

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Review #3, by Wierd_Sisters The Muaruders

16th March 2005:
may i aks you who did the artwork on your banner?

Author's Response: I found them on google, I'm not really sure, but if you google "Remus Lupin" or "Anime Remus Lupin" something should come up.

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Review #4, by steve34 The Muaruders

15th March 2005:
Very charming story, and heart-wrenching. I always hate reading about the last of the Marauders... well, no, not hate. I like reading about Lupin, it's just hard knowing he's the last of James, Sirius and Peter (whom I consider died the night he gave away James and Lily). But that's beside the point. Umm... improvement: grammar and spelling, definitely. Other than that, your ability to get your ideas and emotions across on paper could easily rank you among the best fan fic authors I've read. You just need to brush up on the technical skills. Definitely keep writing, as the only way to improve is to practice, and your writing is worth a few spelling errors any day!

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much, I'm trying to work on my writing skills, like "The Pensieve" which is a recently added story that I think is much better than my others...thanks again!

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Review #5, by steve34 The Muaruders

15th March 2005:
Spelling errors, and you use "said" a lot. You stop using "said" as much near the end, of this chapter, which is good. The chapter itself is fun. Appropriately tense and exciting and funny at the right times. Since this is your first non-romantic fic I've read, I'm really impressed! Work on spelling. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, it's kind of hard for me to write non-romantic fics, just because I'm a hopeless romantic...but I need a little adventure every once and a while...lol

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Review #6, by Violet Gryfindor The Muaruders

20th February 2005:
Great ending, even though it was heart-wrenchingly sad. I haven't seen or read a fic that showed the Marauder's first time as Animagi, which makes this one original as well as creative. You have Remus' character down amazingly, as well as those of the other Marauders. In all, this is a brilliant story!

Author's Response: awww, thanks so much! I absolutely adore Lupin!

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Review #7, by Violet Gryfindor The Muaruders

20th February 2005:
Very good story so far! You've captured the personalities of each of the Marauders wonderfully, which is difficult to do sometimes. Other than a couple spelling/grammar mistakes (ie: there instead of they're), this is great! Another for my favourites list! :-)

Author's Response: This was my first Marauders story, so it's nice to know that I can write those (or at least that someone thinks I can)! Thanks again!

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Review #8, by christinagwenlupin The Muaruders

12th January 2005:
MORE!!! NOW I COMMAND YOU! ppllleeeaasssseeee i miss the cupcake pahahja!

Author's Response: Okay...lol

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Review #9, by Prudence Prior The Muaruders

28th December 2004:
I stumbled on your story..it's a very nice start..I'll look up your others..and check back...Remus is such a wonderful character that you've written well. Pru

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yeah Remus is my favorite mauruder...

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Review #10, by Albus Dumbledore The Muaruders

18th July 2004:
WOW THAT WAS MORE THAN LIKELY WHAT HAPPENED TO THEM WHEN THEY CHANGED THATS NEAT!!!

Author's Response: I KNOW RIGHT! LOL

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Review #11, by 2lazy2log_in The Muaruders

14th July 2004:
Hmm… it was pretty good. I liked the whole idea. Just one quick little thing that kinda bothered me: When Remus went to the Shrieking Shack for his transformations, Madam Pomfrey took him down through the tunnel. But, it’s your story. Anyway, I’ll keep an eye out for the second chapter.

Author's Response: I know about that madam promfrey thing, but i wanted this to be just the 4 boys, so i kind of edited it out...lol

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