{reviewid: 2744131, reviewer: 'cassie%20hammonds'}
4th October 2012:
make more i like this story :)
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{reviewid: 2744130, reviewer: 'cassie%20hammonds'}
4th October 2012:
i really like this story! do more like this
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{reviewid: 2630090, reviewer: 'S'}
17th December 2011:
Please write more! It was getting really good
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{reviewid: 2213369, reviewer: 'ginnyrox895'}
8th September 2009:
A couple of things:
1.Why would they have a charms class th day before graduation?
2.Through is spelled wrong (in the graduation ceremony scene)
3.Don't add commentary throughout the story. Put it at the beginning and the end.
4.Please refrain from using the word "stuff". It sounds tacky.
5. I love the part about Harry, Ron, and Hermione walking down the aisle together!
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{reviewid: 2213363, reviewer: 'ginnyrox895'}
8th September 2009:
This chapter seemed a little.forced. It just seemed out of place. I would try making revisions.
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{reviewid: 2212911, reviewer: 'ginnyrox895'}
7th September 2009:
Aww... I can really see Ron doing something like what he did to Seamus.
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{reviewid: 2212906, reviewer: 'ginnyrox895'}
7th September 2009:
Cute! Just one thing: If it says 6:00, you shouldn't put the o'clock after it. Other than that, great job.
-KT
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{reviewid: 2212901, reviewer: 'ginnyrox895'}
7th September 2009:
Aww...great 1st chapter!!!
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{reviewid: 1859894, reviewer: 'HermyBug12'}
10th March 2008:
i really like this story, its a shame you arent updateing anymore! i really like it
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{reviewid: 1812673, reviewer: 'FAieryGal'}
30th January 2008:
NO! How could you leave us with a cliff hanger?
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{reviewid: 1611212, reviewer: 'dark-lord--happy-pants'}
| Review #11, by dark-lord--happy-pants | One Hour |
3rd September 2007:
WHAT?! it said u ABANDONED this story?!
but i LUV it!
u HAVE to continue!
HAVE TO!
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{reviewid: 1547874, reviewer: 'megkers'}
1st August 2007:
I really like the idea of this story, but it seems that the characterization is lacking. I love the well developed plotline, but maybe some more time can be devoted to inner feelings so that people will grow more attached to your Ron and Hermione. No bad feelings are intended, I just wanted to offer some constructive critisim. Can't wait to read more. :)
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{reviewid: 1234107, reviewer: 'Tajarae'}
19th December 2006:
THe BEST story Ever written in this world!1
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{reviewid: 943451, reviewer: 'someone'}
19th March 2006:
is it will going like that, all along?
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{reviewid: 883268, reviewer: 'whatever101'}
31st January 2006:
is there more???
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{reviewid: 883152, reviewer: 'whatever101'}
31st January 2006:
this story is very good i like how u made it like they still dont tell each other about them liking each other! keep it up!
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{reviewid: 827196, reviewer: 'mione%26ronRmeanttobe92'}
| Review #17, by mione&ronRmeanttobe92 | One Hour |
26th December 2005:
this should mature not 15+
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{reviewid: 827182, reviewer: 'mione%26ronRmeanttobe92'}
26th December 2005:
this is starting to get disturbing
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{reviewid: 827159, reviewer: 'mione%26ronRmeanttobe92'}
26th December 2005:
ew i hope ur not thinking about what im thinking when u mean eh also hopes something else happens
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{reviewid: 822802, reviewer: 'dixiedog'}
22nd December 2005:
ok i don't now where to start (ILOVED IT)
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{reviewid: 822801, reviewer: 'dixiedog'}
22nd December 2005:
ok i don't now where to start (ILOVED IT)
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{reviewid: 822799, reviewer: 'dixiedog'}
22nd December 2005:
ok i don't now where to start (ILOVED IT)
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{reviewid: 658184, reviewer: 'Jamie_Malfoy'}
20th August 2005:
great chapter, i must say. i can't wait to see what happens from here. i love reading all your stories, and can't wait to see the next chapters to all of them.
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{reviewid: 647797, reviewer: 'ronsbiggestfan09'}
14th August 2005:
good story! i like the "holy <<tag not allowed="red">tag not allowed="red">censored hermione!" i literally laughed out loud! lol. keep it up!
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{reviewid: 630599, reviewer: 'Julia'}
5th August 2005:
Update PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ, it´s an awesome story you can´t leave it like that
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