Ew. Worse. Worse, wrose worse, I can't beleive I read on.

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Ew. Even wrose grammer and spelling. Needs more detail. Again, runons and runon paragraph. This is horrid. You need a Beta Reader

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Errr.Horrible grammer and spelling, and caps and quotes. And what is it? not even 1oo words? And it is a runon paragraph, not to mention run on sentences. DOn't like it a bit. You need to do better.

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kind of short

Author's Response: thanx for the review i know i am not done with it yet i have been so busy lately that i have not had any time to update it in a while

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Yo yo memory chip! lol I'm with you right now...and I think it's a unique story- keep up the good work- you don't usually see this story line :)

Author's Response: Thanks. I can't wait to read yours ... lol. I will try and update as soon as i can that will probly be sometime the week of the 24 because i am on vacation untill then. later

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The story was really good you had a lot of good details, but I think you made Hedwig come back to soon. Other than that I loved your story. Your a good auther. I can't wait to read the rest of your story. I'm hooked to it!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! You are right i should of made Hedwig come back a little bit later but i had a lead and i was going with it. I will try and update it as soon as i can.

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PLEASE R/R!!!!!

Author's Response: Yes please do

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loved it...lol

Author's Response: Please review everyone!!!

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I think the story if very good, but it's a littl hard to read, you should think about breaking it up in to paragraghs somehow

Author's Response: thanks for the review...sure i can do that!

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Good story, but you spelled Dudley's name wrong.

Author's Response: OMG i am so sorry. i will fix it!

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Good, but what happens NEXT???? Please finish it!

Author's Response: OMG!!!!! I Fell so bad now...i will change it right away thanks for the heads up!!

Author's Response: thanks i will as soon as i can

Author's Response: please inorge the response above about spelling!lol

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Lady's*

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Ashley, great job, but the ladies name is Mafalda Hopkirk (I thik my last name spelling is wrong but I'm posotive about the first one. Great job, once again! Later! ; )

Author's Response: Hey thanks for the tip...knowing me i was bound to make a mistake somewhere...lol

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update

Author's Response: thanks for the review, since you said for me to update, will asume that you liked it!

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Great job, I was thinking...u could combine like five of ur chapters into one that would be a good length....Later!

Author's Response: thanks i will think about it...lol

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Well it was alright a little quick I think you need longer chapters.

Author's Response: thanks for the review.. good idea but for now this is my style

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Great story....but you know, I was there the day you wrote it and I know you have more so UPDATE.

Author's Response: thank you yes you are right i do have more....i just have to find the time to to it if all goes well it will be updated on friday

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