{reviewid: 1567291, reviewer: 'chereub'}
11th August 2007:
hey its bec brioney when you get this if you want to read mine or send me a message im this one oh and its really good
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{reviewid: 1218673, reviewer: 'Jonathanbabe'}
5th December 2006:
Good story btw this is tori. hahahahaha i like your title to the chapter the most
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{reviewid: 439093, reviewer: 'marisa'}
31st March 2005:
two words: write more
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{reviewid: 251571, reviewer: 'Brian'}
18th October 2004:
Great story i can not wait for the next chapter. let me know
brian
brrkelly@ksu.edu
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{reviewid: 214390, reviewer: 'spew1415'}
11th August 2004:
really nice story! keep writing! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm about to go post my next chapter right...now!!
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{reviewid: 212897, reviewer: 'iwpotter'}
9th August 2004:
Very good story so far. I love the new character!! Keep updating
Author's Response: Thank you!!
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{reviewid: 212839, reviewer: 'Adhara%20Black'}
9th August 2004:
Yay! Good chapter! I'm really interested, so please please please update soon!
'It's the best story I've ever read' lol, oh and I am keeping it on 10, don't worry!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! I'm glad to see that my author notes have an influence on some people...lol!!
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{reviewid: 209517, reviewer: 'aviva'}
6th August 2004:
its excellent!!!!! please post asap!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm working on the next chapter right now!!
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{reviewid: 206398, reviewer: 'Endless%20Armageddon'}
2nd August 2004:
Very good, mate. I love the plot. It's quite pleasing to read. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you!!
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{reviewid: 206152, reviewer: 'Adhara%20Black'}
2nd August 2004:
Woohoo! Yay! I've waited forever to read your new chapter! And it is GOOD! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
~~*Adhara*~~
p.s: check out my story "The True Legacy" I'd love to hear your opinions!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on the next chapter right now. Oh, and I'll definatly check out your story!!
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{reviewid: 190054, reviewer: 'Adhara%20Black'}
14th July 2004:
Happy Birthday! And my gift for you is rating this a perfect 10!! : ) Keep up the great work, and I'll be reading your story till 'The End'......~^*Adhara*^~
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! It's nice to know that I have fans...lol...;-)
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{reviewid: 186993, reviewer: 'cynai'}
10th July 2004:
Your story has a very good plot, I would add in future chapters more information about Ally and her family. Also I think it would be a bit easier to immagine if you described the areas around the characters more. Other than that I love the story and can't wait until you write more!
Author's Response: Okk, thanks for the advice. I will definatly try to be more descriptive. And about Ally, you'll learn more later, don't worry!!
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{reviewid: 184048, reviewer: 'Adhara%20Black'}
7th July 2004:
Oh! Don't think that you're story is boring! It's the exact opposite, and I find it very interesting, and you've got me wondering where you're going to go with this. So keep up the good work!! ~^~^ Adhara~^~^
Author's Response: thank you!!
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{reviewid: 184025, reviewer: 'mrsvioletpotter'}
7th July 2004:
excellent chapter!!! i like it a lot. ! please update soon!!! like pronto!!!! jk.
Author's Response: lol - I'll update as soon as I can
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{reviewid: 183695, reviewer: 'Calico'}
7th July 2004:
This is gonna be really good, I can tell! Please update!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 182943, reviewer: 'mrsvioletpotter'}
6th July 2004:
AhA!!! i knew it!! woo! im so totally psychic!!! LoL well great chapter, and please update soon!!
Author's Response: yup, you figured me out! :-). Thanks for your review.
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{reviewid: 182023, reviewer: 'mrsvioletpotter'}
5th July 2004:
one word: UPDATE!!!!!! lol, i like it a lot, so far, the beginning was a bit dull, (sorry for that) buit the ending was a lot better, i wonder who this mystery person is *coughhermionecough* lol just a hunch, please update soon
Author's Response: yeah I knew that the beginning was going to be a little bit boring, but I promise ya that it won't be for long! Thanks for your review though! :-)
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{reviewid: 181853, reviewer: 'Adhara%20Black'}
5th July 2004:
I think it's a wonderful story so far. You really tap into JKR's writing style. Please continue writing this one, I'm really anxious to read it!!
Author's Response: again, thank you so much!
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{reviewid: 181850, reviewer: 'Adhara%20Black'}
5th July 2004:
I think it's a wonderful story so far. You really tap into JKR's writing style. Please continue writing this one, I'm really anxious to read it!!
Author's Response: Wow...now that is truly a great complement! :-) thank you so much!!
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{reviewid: 181845, reviewer: 'aly'}
5th July 2004:
Really good!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
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