56 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Rosie darling The transformation

18th July 2007:
nooo wayy.. lily was there !! that was a shocker !! you are doing fantastic with this story =]

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Review #2, by Samatha Hufflepuff The transformation

26th May 2007:
Great story! PLEASE CONINUTE!

-Sam

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Review #3, by writersblock The transformation

7th May 2007:
wow...not much to compliment; just remember that most guys don't show their excitement. do you have a brother or some type of guy friend? watch a guy act to get inspiration.

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Review #4, by writersblock The bet

7th May 2007:
If I were you I would refer to the fifth harry potter book. that way you could try to match the real characters to your story; to try and not make them act totally different than how they really were. Remember, james-cocky and full of himself, remus-smart and kind too, sirius-handsome and almost vain, and peter-totally nervous and afraid. otherwise you did peter perfectly!

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Review #5, by o0o_no1_o0o The transformation

16th April 2007:
werez nxt chap!hurry

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Review #6, by SeriousSiriusluver The bet

7th August 2006:
great chapie :) the last paragraph was a bit confusing though... but still great

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Review #7, by SeriousSiriusluver Seeing Lily

7th August 2006:
luved the story i like sirius the best but u can tell that by my penname. :)

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Review #8, by Ollie The pleasant suprise

27th October 2005:
she's in denial about liking him i reckon....bahahha

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Review #9, by Aspares Seeing Lily

11th July 2005:
hi

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Review #10, by Aurorgal The transformation

12th March 2005:
hey, you are doing great, I really love your story please keep going

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Review #11, by melvin James Choice

6th January 2005:
again, a funny chapter. I like how you kept all the characters well...in character

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Review #12, by melvin Seeing Lily

6th January 2005:
hahahaha..this is great keep up the good work

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Review #13, by GrammerQueen James Choice

17th November 2004:
"Arculus Repair," chanted Remus. Dont you mean arculus repairo?

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Review #14, by GrammerQueen James Choice

17th November 2004:
'He then noiced his glasses were braked on the left side." Dont you mean broken?

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Review #15, by Sexy Rika Seeing Lily

31st August 2004:
Hi, I'm Rika (me-ow) I'm in love with myself and Max, but he likes the freaky ugly geek with the everchanging hair. Like, eww.So back off, freak-o-zoid. Ugh, like what's her nickname again? oh yes... Josa Rosa. What a ugly girl. But I...yes, I am beautiful. I can see why that freak, Max's best friend, Drake is utterly my biggest fan...in your dreams, you freak. Your story is really good though, i hope James gets Lily (no way Drake, my name is not Lily and you are not James) I'm going to recomend you for story of the month thingy. I'll keep reviwing ! (hands off...Josa...)

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Review #16, by Rule-Br8ker Gandalf The pleasant suprise

30th August 2004:
Great story, man! I'm Illegally Frodo's best friend. His real name is Max Laudd. He's a pretty cool guy. Your cool to! And dude, like he is like so luckey! He has a gf! I dont but theres this girl who is really hotttttt! Her name is Rika. And she has brown hair and she is so smart, You see, I want her to help me with my work caus Im a bad student really. are you? Im a football player and I love doing all these illegal thing but Max alreday took that name. Damn, I miss Rika. I havent seen her in a while, and she is so like totly hot! Theres just something about her. you know what I mean? like you just walk by and you get like a whiff of HOTness! id send you a pic of her but i dont have your e mail. you shold post it on this fan ficsion. if I even had an account id post mine. oh and can you tell max that he made a good choice with Josa? Caus I used to really like her but then she asked him out and they got serius so I gave up on her and now im over her and onto Rika! but who wouldnt be? if you saw her, (your guy right?) you woud so be on to her, i love listening to rap like usher and stuff, i dont care what anybody else says it's not crap like they say it is. i stole my sisters cosmo and some of the girls in it are so hot like thers like lindsey lohan and hilary duff and i gotta go but ill tell you more about the hot sutff later

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Review #17, by Illegally Frodo The pleasant suprise

26th August 2004:
I love Legally legolas I am her boyfriend, yes I am I died my hair last night, its purple to match hers. Yes, I love Orlando Bloom too. And no, I'm not gay. (but if my gf dumped me I would consider seeking out Orlando and marrying him) Just make sure Legally Legolas doesn't read this, ok? Well, anyway, I will have to take back her custom made barbie doll and box of stickers-I thought she liked those!! (hmm) My name is Illegally Frodo-cause I think he is good (great) 2, but not as good as legolas. I am illegal, though, cause I BREAK THE RULES! ROCK ON, DUDE!! (*plays electric guitar in backround*) MWAHAHAHA!!! Rock on, dudette (you are a dudette, right? cause I like, totaly think you are man. Not a man, but like, the rockin' saying, you like, call everyone man or dude and stuff-even gals, I guess they like, got used to being called by the like, oppisite like, uh..what is that word? oh yeah, it's like, the opposite from like, a dude) Oh yeah, man, like, rock on. My gf (who's name is really Josa Rosa(well, that's her other nickname)) like, totaly recomended your story to me, and I like, so totaly love it like, 2. But me and Josa are like, tight, man, you know? We like-know and do and stuff everything alike! ROCK ON, DUDE!!!!!!

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Review #18, by love is a beautiful thing! The pleasant suprise

26th August 2004:
and I love u lots more that I love u!!! does!! take that!

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Review #19, by I really love you The pleasant suprise

26th August 2004:
I love u.

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Review #20, by HATER! The pleasant suprise

25th August 2004:
I HATE YOUR STORY! IT'S JUST PLAIN NASTY! EWWWWWWWWW!

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Review #21, by bebe The pleasant suprise

25th August 2004:
i'm a celebrity. i think your story rocks! keep it up! if you're a girl, u have like a great way of showing romance! if you're a boy, u have romantic thoughts that NEED to be let out. Call me. P.S. if you're a girl, it still doesn't matter...

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Review #22, by betty Seeing Lily

25th August 2004:
cool story! i like reading it! keep it up! P.S. uh... this one person keeps sending all these REALLY long reviews! actually they aren't really reviews. that's scary! anyway keep it up!

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Review #23, by Legally Legolas The transformation

23rd August 2004:
Marauder? Did you read my last review! I think this chapter was really good! And everything! It made me think of me and my boyfriend! Oh he is is SO wonderful! you really should meet him! I think you'd like him, like everybody does! I like pretty guys what about you? I bet you do too. Everybody does! At least everybody should! Hehehe! They are SO awesome! I dyed my hair last night! It's purple now with orange colored streaks! It looks so cool! How many times have you dyed your hair? I love Orlando Bloom, I watched a movie with him in it last night! Oh he is SO cute! Don't you agree! He's almost as cute as my boyfriend! Do you have a boyfriend? Actually Orlando and my boyfriend look like they could be brothers, it's my birthday tomorrow! Happy Birthday to me! I am so happy! Do you wish me a happy birthday? And I have a birthday party and my boyfriend is coming! I am SO excited! I don't know if I've ever been quite as excited before! Let me tell you a little bit about myself, I love my boyfriend, I love Hilary Duff, I hate things like stickers and barbies and stuff because they are so little girly and make me seem like 5 year old! and I think I've told you those things beffore though. I love to do my hair and wear hair clips because I really like buttefly clips! Do you? But then I think that all girls do like butterfly clips? You are a girl right? or are you a guy? Oh well, It doesn't matter to me, I have a boyfriend so I'm used t dealing with boys. My boyfriend is so cute! Lalalala! And I like to play with stuffed animals even though lots of little kids do too, but I don't care I just want to be me and be with my Boyfriend! Well I love sugar frosted honey flakes! Do you? and I simply LOVE to read Archie comic books! They are so cool as well! I dance ballet and I like to listen to rap or I know this sounds weird but I like opera as well, my mommy took me too one and it was so cool! Except for some of the actors were really fat and I asked my mommy why but she said she didn't know. Oh well I have to go now so I'll write another review later! I love your thingys!

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Review #24, by LegallyLegolas Hogmeade

20th August 2004:
I like it. keep it up. gosh! Do u like LOTR? I just LOVE legolas!!!!!!! Do u? PULEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!? I love your story!!! Who's Wendy? Why did u call him or her a boob? Do u know them??? I've never seen Harry Potter! I didn't even know that there were books! Do u like Soccer? I like Soccer! I also just LOVE pink and cheer leading and purple and i'm totally into HOT guys!!!! Are u? Like ORLANDO!!!!!! i have a boyfriend! Who looks kinda like him! I just love him!!!! AS muc as i love pink!! I also love kitties! I hate dogs! they're so dirty and dumb!!!!! I also hate meat and stickers and i REALLY don't like mean people!! My like favourite movie Legally Blonde!! I also like Elijah Wood and Jewel!!! I LOVE HILLARY DUFF!!!! I also like your story!!!!!! oh and if yu were wondering, i'm not mental! Oh and like one of my favourite things to do is talk to random people i like don't even know!!!!!! So do u have a boyfriend?!!?!? i'm 16 old enough to drive!!!! I just got my liscense!!! I'm like telling everybody!!!!!!! What kind of car do u have?!??!? I have a HUMMER!!!! I love them!!! I live in HollyWood, CA!!!!!! Hillary Duff is like my role model!!!!! I hate pickels and eating cuz i like SO don't want to be FAT! But i am PHAT!!!! PRETTY HOT AND TEMPTING!!!!!! YEAH!!!!! I'm hoping that Orli will be coming to Hollywood some day again!!!! *sigh* I just love him!!! My boyfriend reminds me of him every day!!!! He is HOT!!!!!! Sirius and James are like REALLY spicy hot!!!!!! peter is like SO ugy!!!!! He could pay a visit to my cousin! She is like a pro at beauty!!!!!! I go to her salon like every day!! My BEST friend's name is like Alix! SHE ROCKS SO HARD!!!! I love to shop the mall with her!!! I like spend the whole day!!! I consider it a sport!!!! Do u?!?!? Well like i gotta go, i have like SO many reviews to go!!!! I'd give u a 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 if i like could but i can't so i like won't! TT4N Pinkchick!

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Review #25, by Nicegurl Seeing Lily

20th August 2004:
Good job! Wait ta tell all those peeps who are makin fun of ya!!!! U go!

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