I think that it's lovely to actually bring someone special into his life at last. A his family can't exactly be there for him. I just hope that something like that becomes of him in the last book. Nice read. Report Review
aww! So cute! I heart Neville. I'm thinking about writing a Neville romance myself so I'm doing some ... er... research. Good lil' fic. Report Review
awww!! yaay for neville!
that was really cute i enjoyed it alot! Report Review
This was a cute story you made about Neville and your OC.
Hope you'll check out some of my own stories too. Report Review
Yeah, that was pretty cute. It's ok for a one shot, but it would be nice if you could continue it. If not, that's alright too. Great job! ;) Report Review
That was incredibly sweet! Report Review
Awwwwwwww!!! That was soooooooo cute! Report Review
Oh my gosh! That was *sniff, sniff* beautiful! You had better continue, or I will be forced to...I dunno! Just continue it! I totally love Neville, and think his clumsiness is adorable, and if you don't write any more of this...well, I don't know what I'll do with myself! I give you a 10! You are a very good writer! Report Review
Awwwwwwww!!!!!!! That was soooooooo sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep going!!!!! Please??? Please please please?? I was afraid it was going to be Cho...I like it, it's awesome and *squee* so sweet! Report Review
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