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5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by andharrywokeup Chapter 1: Hope

6th April 2005:
a good start! You may want to make your chapters slightly longer! Also try and include more description with the dialogue! Well done!

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Review #2, by sentinel_witch Chapter 1: Hope

7th July 2004:
Cool, sounds like the one I write on my own compurter (yet refuse to publish). Write on!!! No, really... :)

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Review #3, by Anduril Prologue

29th June 2004:
wow!! i luv ur story so far!!...ill check up on this one...please update soon!!

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Review #4, by lalalatada Chapter 1: Hope

29th June 2004:
please review!!!

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Review #5, by Anarchy174 Prologue

29th June 2004:
that was quite good!...id like to see where this is going...please update!

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