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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Trey The dream

27th June 2004:
It short, but i like it, it shows promise, update soon.

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Review #2, by TomFoolery The dream

27th June 2004:
I was kind of wondering when this story was supposed to be set. If you're going to write a fifth year story, tell people! lol. It's not too bad really. There are a few typos, but hey, who's perfect?

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Review #3, by Poetic Martyr The dream

27th June 2004:
I'm such a dolt. I used the word 'also' twice and instead of putting 1000 words, I put 500. Overlook my stupidity.

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Review #4, by Poetic Martyr The dream

27th June 2004:
Have you read the fifth book? (out of curiosity)

Also, it was a bit short and rushed. Everyone likes fics with chapters at -at least- 500 words, ya know.

Also, you had some grammatical errors. Nothing major.

Cheers,
Kirsten

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