Hehehe I like the soldier thing lol! I defiently would have had some fun with the dursleys but hey it your story!!!

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Started off very well! I am glad i clicked on random story now = )

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this is great!!

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Overall, a pretty terrible fic. Not to be mean or disrespectful or anything, but this is my bluntest and most honest opinion.

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I really like your story. It's creative and funny. Very J.K.Rowling style :-D Keep it up, cause I'll be looking for more. (Oh and that whole cowboy stuff in chapter 1... I thought it was funny... don't know why people got so worked up) Well anyway, good job. Two thumbs up!

Author's Response: Thanks. That is what I was trying for.

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your not an american are you ?? other wise you would know NOBODY in american acts like that even people in texas or ranchers. it's kind of annoying how sterotypical the charter is because you play out all americans to be hicks which if you ever been to the country is not true? or where you trying to be sterio type?

Author's Response: You missed the subtile irony of what I was trying to portray here. The character of Snapes is pretty narrow-mined. Even in the realy books. I had my character play to that. By the way, I was born and raised in the great American Southwest. Yes, I am a cowboy. Sad to say to only tihing I ride now days is a desk.

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I really like your story, the cowboy is a bit odd, but funny, cowboys are always cool : ) keep it up

Author's Response: Trying for a different angle. Thanks. Apprecate it. I plan on twisting things more as the story goes on.

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