For this being your first FanFic it isn't too bad. The only real problem I saw was the dialog could be a little better, but other than that it's a good first try. Despite any bad reviews you may get you should keep on writing. If you stop writing you'll never get any better at it. Keep it up . . .you'll get better. If you want to read my Fic it's 'Harry Potter and the LIving Darkness' if not . . .it's all good. Report Review
Ooooh Good good good! I wanna know what else happens. It's a really great story, and I don't usually like add in characters. BTW would you review my story? It's called Together At Last. Thanx. Keep going I wanna read the rest! Report Review
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