2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by daenrhys A Growing Shadow

4th July 2004:
Great story!!!!!!! ;) but 4 gads sake but in talking marks " ya know? " Anyways great story, very accurate, put more action and a teeny bit more angst!!!! lol

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Review #2, by Julie When all seems lost

26th June 2004:
This is really good! the angst is well done - like hes horribly depressed and isolated but when he goes outside/ when his friends come he seems better! nice job. I also like all of the references to the end of the 5 book. Of course, I think it should be longer- keep writing!! I love it :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much Julie, I really appreciated your review! I'm going on holiday soon and I don't have a laptop so I won't be writing for a while [sorry :-( ] but I promise to come back with an even better and longer chapter than the last one. - Josie the Cookie Monster -

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