That chapter was bit ramdom. Please, please update. It has been like two years. Report Review
Jo: Oi, Joey! A Hermione é um lobisomem? Coitada da rapariga! E o ron assim já não a vai achar tão sexy! 'Tâdita!
Mas... Um incentivo... Começas bem rapariga! Escreve muito, a gente adora! Continua! E mete-te lá no meio, quando conseguires, vai ser fixe! Fica bem!
Vanessa: Faço a s minhas palavras as da Joana, mas com mais uma cena... O ron já ñ achava a Hermione muito sexy mas agora k lhe deste um novo fato nem quero imaginar o k ele pensa dela... Coitada da rapariga... Report Review
you're improving, this chapter is even better, please update!! P.S. Do you want to read my story? please do!! My beast story which I resommend to you is 'For Love Or Loyalty?' Report Review
wow, you just learned english, and yet your writing is so creative ? I didn't spot any mistakes. Well, good job:o)! Report Review
Your english is better then mine, and I was born here!!! Brilliant story, please write more x x Report Review
great story-you write really well in english! i hope harry doesnt get jealous or anything! Report Review
i thought that it was great no it wasn't to mushy and the way u ended that chapter was very fun i loved it Report Review
Hey, this chapter was real good. Not to musy! ^_^ Report Review
Hey, I was really impressed with your writing skills since your Portugese. I think your story is great! I really only have one sugestion. Maybe you should add a little Harry into it. Like have it say he figured Ron and Hermione liked one another, and he was okay with it. It's only a sugestion, so you don't have to use it. I think you're doing great! ^_^Author's Response: Thanks for such a great review Jennifer! I'm really happy to find out I can actually write a good fanfic in English! Since you were so nice, I'll try to use your suggestion on the next chapters, which will take a while because I'm going on holiday soon and I don't have a laptop. But I promise to come back as soon as possible with more of "Under a Full Moon Sky".
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