First of all this is one of my fav dramione fanfics. With that being said I have an idea you could work with, maybe have Harry, Ginny, Snap and cissa do whe the golden trio usually do, busrt in and save the day. Have Snap and Harry form the plan to get Draco and Mione back. i dont know. Its an idea lol I do like the story though. :) e-mail me if u have any questions= aurora _ rose 1 2 3 4 @ yhoo . com ignore the spaces tho lol

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i think this has to be one of the sadest things i ever read (and ive read a lot of sad things) i started to cry too

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I have to say I love this story every time I get a chance to read it! I admire your innovative story line so much. And I totally understand the writer's block. I'm working through a severe case myself.. I just wanted to say thanks for not giving up on the story! Its really is a great one! And whenever you get a chance to post another chapter I really look fwd to reading it!!

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oh please say you will finish this aT leaast someday! i don't know if i could take this! This is absolutly amazing. I love it! The evil ron, the good Snape the awesome super-powered confused inlove draco, everything! The only thing wrong in this casserole of brilliance is thAt it hasn't benn updated in merlin knows how long so please fell free to do so! please!

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love it update soon please

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Why did Snape say Mia? Like go get your wand, Mia. I was sort of confused then

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PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I love this story and its killing me to wait. i have resorted to rereading it a million time. please update!!!

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i love your story! it is wonderful! i wish you would keep writing I have waited so long for the next chapter! please keep it up!

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oh please dont tell me snape likes hermione! this story would be perfect otherwise!

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I absolutely love this story and the whole prophecy thing. :)
Do you still need a beta reader? I'm a pretty good one, my grammar and spelling is usually perfect, and I have a good feeling for sentence formatting/variety too.
If you would like me to help, just reply to my review.
Keep it up! :D

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OMG i loved it except the part where Dray and Mione were taken..:( hope the next one comes out soon..

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That last line is what Draco said about Hermione when she stayed in his room the first time and he was watching her sleep.

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omg sooo sad i almost cried but there wuz people in the room and if i was alone i would have cried..

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omg sooo sad i almost cried but there wuz people in the room and if i was alone i would have cried..

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I love it so far, keep up the great work with it. I hope you get more posted soon.

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Hey I have loved your story for a long time now and I thought I might help you out, with the Beta search. I'm not a beta myself because I'm bad at my grammer and mispellings and such but I know this one person who is a beta.

Dark Lady Snape(username)
hp_geek_24 AT yahoo. com

I hope that helps you out :D. If not, you can always go onto Fanfiction .net and join up and look for betas on there?

Anyway thank you for updating this awesome story! love it!

Alonia187. 10*10

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Cliffhanger! :( Oh man, I was like nearly jumping up and down on my bed and then I realized that this was the last chapter.. I didn't have the opportunity to read and review through all the previous chapters, too stuck on the 'next chapter' arrow.. Sorry about that.. I did find a few grammar and spelling mistakes, nothing major though.. This story is certainly different from the others that I've read.. I mean a lot of Dramiones have a cheating Ron but I think this is the first time I've read about a totally evil one.. Certainly piqued my interest.. Oh, and even their history and the prophecy and stuff.. Fascinating.. Though I must admit, the first time I read about the glowing and the healing I randomly remembered Eragon (the movie version, you know 'weiss hale' and all).. I'm very much looking forward to figure this mystery out.. :)

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Three things 1) this story is SO amazing!! It's really well written and you have A really good and refreshing writing technique that very few dramione authors tend to have these days, it seems... This fanfiction has got to be one of my absolute favourites. Ever. :)
2) I heard you wanted a Beta. I would love to have the privilege of being your Beta. It would a complete honour but if you already have someone it is quite alright. But once again, I would love it if it works out.
3) if you are wondering how you could find me, because my name is not a link, i will post another comment soon. It is also Charlotte Malfoy, but it is my actual account and not just me writting in my name which I have to do when I am on my iPhone.

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PLEASE (im practically on my knees here!) WRITE MORE!

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this strory is so tootaaallly AWESOME! cannot wait for the next chapter and i really wish i could write as good as this :) keep up the good.er.writing :P xxx

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Your story is really refreshing to read. It has a fine and nice twist to it and that makes it unique.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

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I love this story! its addicting. I really wonder what will happen next. I also want to know why ron wants hermione so bad. update soon please

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Hey. Amazing storyyy

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that was just.. well.. amazing! that but at the end was a twist alright!!! keep it up :)

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this is getting a little weird now.
9/10

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