You asked me to review, so here i am. THis is a really good piece of work, i really enjoyed reading it. I didnt really understand the part about Dudley still being so big, because in book 5, Order of the Phoenix, the first chapter, Dudley Demented, says that Dudley had been put on a diet, and had lost the fat but was still big from muscles. Does your story just ignore that chapter, or what is going on there? Otherwise, very nice, ten all the way, cant wait to read more. Report Review
Nice beginning, when will u finish it? and can i continue it if u dont finish it? Report Review
Looks like a good story. My only tips are no superpowers, no being able to do wandless magic at an absurd extent, and keep to the plotline (dont get into muggle things like horses and martial arts). Those are the main suicide story things. Plz update soon, cuz im not sure if i can stand teh wait :-) Report Review
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