Hi there!
It's a great first FanFiction, congratulations! I live the way you capture the different point of views. This goes up with some of my favourite Harry/Ginny one-shots.
One thing I noticed is that when it's just Harry, the paragraphs are arranged a little strangely! I'm just picky though and generally try to find faults as it makes me feel better :D mwahahaha!
Lovely writing, keep it up!
LWG x

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Awwwww..........how sweet and cute! It gives yu that funny little fuzzy feeling! Adorable! 6 stars! (on a 1 to 5 scale of corse!)

Author's Response: Thank you!!! That means so much to me. It gave me a fuzzy feeling when I wrote it, too. I know that it no longer goes with canon (hey, at least it happened in canon), but that's okay. Again, thanks

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btw it was so cute and u r such a good writer~love the story and make another one but make it a whole lot longer~

Author's Response: Glad that you liked the story, and thanks for the review. I am working on a longer story, but it's mainly about "The Next Generation" I just moved so *crosses fingers* I hope to get started on it again, soon. :)

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omg come on you have to add more to that story! it's really good have them get married and r/h getting into a big fight~so big thatthey might not stay together any more but ron comes begging back and he's all like 'sorry, sweetie, i'm so sorry will you marry me?' and this is in front of everyone~ like let's say in Diagon Ally? and r/h and h/g have a double wedding in the Caribean or so other place romantic like that~ thats a good story! i'm such a genuis *lol*

Author's Response: LOL! Thanks for the reviews. I could really see Ron making Hermione so angry he has to beg, but I like it when their sweet, too. Yeah, you are a genius. lol!

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That was really cool

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review sorry so late in response, no computer at home right now. So I am working on another fanfic, but not sure when I will be able to post. This one will be a multi-chapter fic. Thanks again.

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Wow! I loved that, it was soooo sweet and real, and I loved the Ron and Hermione thing, that was so cute!

Author's Response: Thanks about that. I liked Ron and Hermione in this, too. I think Ron has the ability to become the best little romantic thing. hehe! Thanks for the review!

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Awww, that was filled with oodles of mushy cute-ness! I love it so much! You should write a nice long Harry/Ginny fanfiction now ^.^

Author's Response: Thanks about that. I love mushy-gushy cuteness (although I won't admit it, so shhhh!) hehe. Thanks I am going to work on a longer H/G fic, I have one planned about their kids and it has a few H/G moments, but I want one about them, too.

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Hey! I think your story is wicked! I think you should write a little more, though. Write on. P.S.: The 9's 'cause you didn't write enough, dude! You left me hangin!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review sorry so late in response, no computer at home right now. So I am working on another fanfic, but not sure when I will be able to post. This one will be a multi-chapter fic. Thanks again. Thanks so much about the compliment. I am actually planning on being a writer. Sorry it wasn't enough, will try better next time. :)

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review sorry so late in response, no computer at home right now. So I am working on another fanfic, but not sure when I will be able to post. This one will be a multi-chapter fic. Thanks again. Thanks so much about the compliment. I am actually planning on being a writer. Sorry it wasn't enough, will try better next time. :)

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great story! it would make a great multi chapter fanfic :)

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review sorry so late in response, no computer at home right now. So I am working on another fanfic, but not sure when I will be able to post. This one will be a multi-chapter fic. Thanks again.

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nice story/(chapter??) i love it a lot. but i don't know if you shall keep writing on this story, it is just a damn good ending. keep up the good work :-)

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review sorry so late in response, no computer at home right now. So I am working on another fanfic, but not sure when I will be able to post. This one will be a multi-chapter fic. Thanks again. I planned it as a one-shot, but may continue with it.

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I luved you should write much much more! i'll be sure to review!::bribe::

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review sorry so late in response, no computer at home right now. So I am working on another fanfic, but not sure when I will be able to post. This one will be a multi-chapter fic. Thanks again.

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great story you should become a writer i didnt want the story the end so soon cause it was so good.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review sorry so late in response, no computer at home right now. So I am working on another fanfic, but not sure when I will be able to post. This one will be a multi-chapter fic. Thanks again.

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Yes you need to continue it!! You did a great job. ; )

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review sorry so late in response, no computer at home right now. I'm working on another fanfic, but not sure when I will be able to post. It will probably be finished before I can post it. This one will be a multi-chapter fic. Thanks again.

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Great job!!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review sorry so late in response, no computer at home right now. Thanks again.

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Aww. I love it. Write more, please! :-)

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review sorry so late in response, no computer at home right now. So I am working on another fanfic, but not sure when I will be able to post. This one will be a multi-chapter fic. Thanks again.

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