Loving the scenes with Sirius and Lily! I luv there friendship. U have made me feel so close to the characters! My face is wet with tears! Great job! LOVE IT Report Review
thoroughly enjoying thus far. :) Report Review
hey buddy ur excellent at last few chapters .just brilliant Report Review
This whole thing was brilliant! I literally couldn't stop reading. You're an amazing author. Thank you so much for making a story about Lilly and James that seems believable and stays true to their character. I seriously could rant forever about this, but I'll stick to what you should already know. THis was awesome, and I will most definitely have to read it again. Report Review
I loved this story! One of the best L&J story's that I've read! Report Review
I just read this whole story in one go, it is awesome! you are such a fantastic writer! Report Review
Thank you, for the whole story, just thank you Report Review
Oh my Merlin. I absolutely LOVED this whole story. It was AMAZING. It was very detailed, and I listened to the music for some of the chapters, and listening to it helped me understand that story a lot. It was an amazing story!!
10/10 Report Review
I declare this to be my most favoritest chappitor!! :D 10/10! Report Review
Interesting twist, making Lily a Chaser.. I've seen it a couple times before, but I always picture her completely uninterested in Quidditch, and scared of heights.
10/10 Report Review
Love your writing style!! It's FANTASTIC. Your vocabulary is wonderfully refreshing, and your grammar is impeccable!
10/10 Report Review
I SPEAK FRENCH!
im not even sure if your actually reading this stuff cuz ur wrote the story a long time ago (im assuming) and your probably to tired and lazy to reply to my reviews (im assuming)
and other stuff.
so like, I LOVE THIS STORY! :D
--faithful (pft yeah right) fangirl(: Report Review
and i listened it to the song, but it got over when i was like, 1/4 done reading it [ i know, i know i read slow :( ] but yeah, i know imma like the rest of this story :) Report Review
that was brill and really true to the characters. Report Review
I just spent the past 2 days reading this, and figured it would only be fair to you to tell you that this is my favorite James/Lily fic i have ever read, and you are competing with about 60 other writers when i say that. This story made me smile, and almost brought me to tears it was phenomenal, so never ever stop writing: you are truly gifted. Report Review
I love how you did the epilouge where Lily was pregnant instead of on Halloween. It's a nice change from all the others. Loved your story. Especially their first kiss-in the rain. So cliche, yet stull so cute. 100/10 :) Report Review
I really liked it there was an ominous tone about it Report Review
i like the story, but there's one thing that's really bugging me. Lily was never on the Quidditch team, seeing as she couldn't fly a broom to save her life, and she was terrified of heights. Harry's Quidditch talent came solely from his father. Report Review
Oh my goodness, this chapter was wonderful! I was listening to this song called sweet escape by paul cardall- a terribly romantic piece and it fit in so perfectly with the moment that I had tears in my eyes. Gosh I'm a sap. Anyways love this story so much! Great job! Report Review
Yeah! Awesome story! Er.It was like aWKWaRD when james took lilys virginity away whenn he got bck. Report Review
Eew!!! A Slytherin! Why am I named 'Lionbane'? Slytherin fucking sucks! Report Review
I thought that this was an amazingly written story. First off, the spelling and grammar isn't perfect, but it is better than any other story I've read so far. Secondly, the plot and all of the facts seem to line up with all of JK's books. Thirdly, I loved all of emotions everyone had. They seemed very real and not too extreme. These emotions were went beyond amazing when you didn't allow Lily to fall for James all at once. Fourthly, even though there was a lot of conflicts in this story, they all revolved around James' and Lily's relationship and all of the conflicts changed their relationship. I could ramble on forever about how amazing this story is. Keep on writing. Report Review
You're terrible. You made me CRY. Damn writer girl T.T
But. I LOVE YOU. This was amazing! EHRIFGKNBMW. DI KILLED HIM. EFF YEAH!
(Excuse any hyperactive behavior, as I haven't slept yet. Cough. 11:35am. Cough. BUT YEAH.)
Oh God. I really don't sound professional, do I? Ahem.
Wonderful story, wonderful plotline, wonderful characters, wonderfully realistic - all 'round WONDERFUL!
Okay, sorry. Caffeine's a hoare.
You made me like Sirius more than I did to begin with. THAT'S A FREAKIN' MIRACLE, WOMAN.
..I really hope you are a girl. I don't want to offend you.
Heh. I'm babbling - And, not even about your extremely awesome self.
I hope there's not a character limit on reviews.
YOU BETTER ACTUALLY READ THIS, TOO.
So.. now we've established that you're awesome, and I'm high. Your story is incredibly epic. LESS THAN THREE.
Argh, I'm not being professional.. again. I really need to work on that.
Honestly, there was one MAJOR disappointment in this story. Well, "major" may be a little exaggerated. What happened to Snape, eh? I was hoping for him to sneak in for a bit of, "Lets make Lily's life even more confusing!" and a bit of snogging behind tapestries. Heh. Oh well. I'll make something up.
Arrivederci. Sorry to be a - hyperactive - pain in the neck. Report Review
Wow. This is an excellent story. I followed along effortlessly, and was engaged in all your twists and turns. I am very glad to have clicked on this story, as it is obvious that you care a lot about it, and that you put a lot of effort into it. I don't know how much praise can make you prouder of what you've done than having done it. Nice job, and thanks for an awesome read!
-Dani Report Review
I liked it, it shows that Lily isn't the only one with issues.Author's Response: Haha, nope. everyone has issues. Report Review
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