LOVE IT KEEP GOOING!!

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its o.k. theyre a bit short, neat idea, ive given you a 7, im assuming what all that piece of papers all about in the next chap? i did enjoy it, but it is a jumbled up, and its a bit rushed aswell. i llike ur curse you made up, but james would have probably thrown him across the yard and fill his mouth with bubbles, like he did in the order of hte pheonix, but i do like ur idea

Author's Response: I'm not talking to you so stop puttin in these fake ppl n bad reveiws let other ppl look at it for a change n yours isn't the greatest story eva is it so shut up, at least i was nice.

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Interesting, a few mistakes here and there, not too many though. Overall, good work! Keep it up.

Author's Response: oh god, i havent read the books in a while, but thanx for pointing that out ill be careful next time, lol

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Um...that was....interesting...

Author's Response: good or bad? lol

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Okay, interesting start... Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: thanx gald u enjoyed it, lol

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gud idea, but too short and is a bit confusing, theres too much talkin, and i had to read it a couple more times to find out they were actually in diagon alley, and huever rated u there isnt giving u a straight idea,in my eyes they cant rate a story for their life and probably cant write one either, by the way, i havent got a story on this site, ive got it on sirius' site, go there, gud storys ill post it in a couple of days

Author's Response: shut up sam

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Hey Sazzarah, Grood story! Keep it up P.S Guess who I am? TIP: Play with hair, look at nails

Author's Response: thanx cazz!! heh

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gr8 keep it up or else u biatch!

Author's Response: okay okay dony get made at me kik!!

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Good so far. Keep it up!

Author's Response: thank you and i will

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