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Review #1, by patronus_charm Lost & Found

8th July 2014:
Hi there!

Haha, Ginny made me laugh a lot when she was like ahaha mum leave me alone as I totally got her as itís always the same with me and my mum. You actually made her character shine through in this really tiny intro which was really impressive and I hope we can see more soon. I liked the build-up to the diary too as it was really dramatic with the dust and Ginny being angry as I had a feeling something big was about to come and then there was a dun, dun, dun moment and it happened so whoo! Ooh I wonder how she links to Voldemort though as it does sound very strange but I like the idea of a new family member though, I hope this is continued!

-Kiana
House Cup 2014 Review & Educational Decree #3

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Review #2, by randomwriter Lost & Found

8th July 2014:
House Cup 2014: Educational Decree Number Three

Hello :) I'm here to review your lovely chapter for the House Cup!

I think you've managed to build up the curiosity here really well. As a reader, I really wanted to know what happens next. Does she open the diary? Have a second go at looking into something so dark, this time, knowingly? (I assume she's already been through the first episode, as she's sixteen here). But weren't Harry adn Hermione staying with them that year?

Ah, well! questions questions! I'll have to wait for them to be answered, right? :p Anyway, I really liked this chapter and I hope you will continue this because I'd love to learn what happens next and have atleast some of those questions answered!

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Review #3, by FredWeasleyIsMyKing Lost & Found

8th July 2014:
Hey there!

You really built up the tension here in this first chapter! I think the story is a great idea and I was really curious what you would do with it. I must admit though, I was gutted it ended there! I really wanted ginny to start reading it and find out some of it's secrets! In a short opening though, I felt you did ginny justice and your descriptions were really good of the attic. I just missed the ghoul!! I liked that ginny originally thought that the whole thing would e rubbish to start with but realised that some of the stuff up there was actually cool :) great job!!

Hope you update soon :)

Lauren
House Cup 2014 Review
Educational Decree #3

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Review #4, by LostMaeblleshire Lost & Found

30th April 2005:
It's really too bad you don't write anymore, because it's a great idea...

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Review #5, by Windforce Lost & Found

27th May 2004:
Good beginning. When are you going to send a next chapter? great story

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