{reviewid: 2722119, reviewer: 'Kira'}
18th July 2012:
Very funny and lighthearted, but I am confused as to why its written in this format. Its kind of written out like a play...is that how its supposed to be. I think you might want to try flushing it out a bit more so we get more than just the dialogue, and get some description as well. You really have a unique voice when writing, so you should really explore that more, and give the story the time that it needs! Very funny though, I had a good laugh!
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{reviewid: 1885440, reviewer: 'DanielLuver1274'}
4th April 2008:
Omg! That was hilarious. Keep writing these funny stories, please.
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{reviewid: 822265, reviewer: 'chloe'}
22nd December 2005:
I like the humor. Spellings a bit dodgy though. Is this a one shot or are there more chapters to come?
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{reviewid: 808201, reviewer: 'Draconia'}
12th December 2005:
man, i want part of that cookie.... good job!
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{reviewid: 564157, reviewer: 'Aunt%20Jemima'}
26th June 2005:
that reminds me of the half-moon cookie cake my sister had for her birthday!
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{reviewid: 517553, reviewer: 'pyro'}
27th May 2005:
this is really good! and also really funny!
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{reviewid: 500791, reviewer: 'memories325'}
14th May 2005:
Ha Ha
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{reviewid: 497532, reviewer: 'Kerry'}
12th May 2005:
Lmao :) That was great. Very funny :) Keep writing!
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{reviewid: 372267, reviewer: 'ss10009'}
12th February 2005:
it's cute. and it sounds sooooooo delicious lol. i'll have to make a cookie-cake...or try...but if sirius and james can do it. so can i! lol
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{reviewid: 275065, reviewer: 'Born_Quidditch_Player18'}
25th November 2004:
lol. thats hilariouse!
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{reviewid: 234402, reviewer: 'Stray'}
24th September 2004:
hehehehe
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{reviewid: 160981, reviewer: '%2Ascabbers%2A'}
29th May 2004:
Crazy. Insane. but funny! haha nice job!
Author's Response: I'm the sane one among my friends, believe it or not. Most of them are at least twice as crazy as me. Anyways thanks for the nice review.
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{reviewid: 160150, reviewer: 'MelissaMoony'}
27th May 2004:
That was cute, only bad thing was it made me want cookies...
Author's Response: Yeah, I made biscuits after I wrote it. They were shaped as dog bones. Go figure.
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{reviewid: 159875, reviewer: 'kaitie'}
27th May 2004:
cute! write other stories! great job! :)
Author's Response: Thanks.
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{reviewid: 159492, reviewer: 'Windforce'}
26th May 2004:
Well you sure was bored! but I liked your story:)
when will be the next chapter?
Author's Response: Thanks, well it was Saturday afternoon and I just finished baking. I really didn't have anything better to do. Ooops! I just typed it on Notepad and pasted it onto one chapter. I guess I should have divided the story into chapters.
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{reviewid: 158736, reviewer: 'Phoenix_Girl13'}
25th May 2004:
hehehehahaha I love this very Sirius and JAmes
Author's Response: Thank you. Sirius is one of my favorite characters. There's another funny story by AmyPadfootLupin about the Marauders, mainly Sirius and James. It's called 'In the Chatroom'
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{reviewid: 158465, reviewer: 'MystMarie'}
24th May 2004:
Cute! :D Those cookies sound yummy!!!!!!! Wish I could have been there to help!
Author's Response: Thanks. They sound good but I don't think I could handle that much sugar and chocolate chips though!
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{reviewid: 158462, reviewer: 'Miss%20Liberty'}
24th May 2004:
great! i love it when they make stories about sirius and james, there are hilarious!
Author's Response: The Marauders are halarious. Its allways easy to have them say something stupid or funny. Thanks for the good review!
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