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Review #1, by dat girl A splitting headache

24th May 2004:
fer yer first story, dat seemed pretty good. da onli suggestion i have is dat u look over your wording more carefully. sum sentences aren't phrased very well. and there r sum grammar mistakes. but i'm just bein a little picky. it was an overall plus.

Author's Response: thnx dat girl

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