Awww dangit! I wanted to read this! Good planning tho

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I think this story would be hilarious. You should keep writing it, I'll stick with it and give u feedback, so please write it.

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it sounds like a brilliant idea and i hope you write this story soon and if you already a have ill ave already read it so hurry up

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sounds strange, but good!

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I'd say I've never seen anything suck so much, but then again, I've seen many awfully sucky things.

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Hey look im the first reivewer YEAH! i love being the first one lol! Anyhoo, why not, you might as well give it a go. I mean after all i love to write, i no i\'m not one of the best writers or anything, but i continue to post my chapters even if i only get a little support just or the enjoyment or writer. Plus, as i have found, the more you experiment, the more you learn, and the better writer you become. What harm can one chapter do? i always experiment with one chapter before deleteing the story (or of course posting more lol). Anyhoo, i\'d be glad to give you the supposrt to start. I always trying to review my fellow writers who haven\'t gotten many reivews, but have good stories. Reviews are terribly hard to come by now a days and even getting one if such a genourus thing. So you give and you get, so i\'m giveing right now. Sorry for rambling on with no point, lol. I\'ll stop here, but if youe ver need help or anything you can always call on my (beleive me i need it sometimes to so we can help each other out lol jk jk jk)- *Nat!

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