7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by lions_main22 House of Concealments

15th March 2006:
what of coarse harry is a teenager! he is sixTEEN!!!

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Review #2, by Hermione Tonks House of Concealments

30th September 2004:
woweee.....very suspenseful, very twisting! interesting and even more interesting. please R&R my stories please!

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Review #3, by Yvvone House of Concealments

18th May 2004:
You are a great writer, please post more soon! I love your technique and the way you describe everything so well. Also you've given character emotions to the Dursley's, which up until book five never showed their inner emotions! You're excellent at being precise to the characters and helping them grow since the last book!

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Review #4, by Ashley House of Concealments

15th May 2004:
This is by far the best story I've read on here. Keep going and don't change one thing. I'm in love with the story line and the plot. I cannot wait until you submit the second chapter. I'll be looking forward to it by far.

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Review #5, by ButterflyPoet House of Concealments

15th May 2004:
I absolutely love this story!!! I don't think you should have to change the wording just so that other people can be happy!!! I mean if you listen to what everyone wants you to do about little nit picky things like that you'll be going spare! Just write the way you feel most comfortable writing, which is absolutely excellent!!! POST THE SECOND CHAPTER SOON!!!

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Review #6, by JON House of Concealments

13th May 2004:
if the kids cant understand it then they shouldnt read it so dont try and make she/he change the story because you cant read big words

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Review #7, by ronweasley House of Concealments

13th May 2004:
hey! im scanning the site for 6th year fics and this one came up. i have to say, great start! its very close to canon, and the style is very good too. would you mind if i gave you some suggestions? 1) most readers here are kids, and they enjoy concise chapters, so if you were to cut down your first one into at least two or three parts, you'd have many more readers! 2) the "big" words are great, they show you're smart and know what you're doing, but try to but in stuff the kiddies understand! haha, hope i didnt critisize too much, keep up the good work!

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