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22 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Carina Welcome Home

7th July 2004:
A Cliffhanger on the first chapter- that's not fair. Nice chapter though.... :)

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Review #2, by SciFi129 The Misfortune

4th July 2004:
Very nice so far! Very interesting. I'd like to see more details than dialogue (maybe in the other chapters). keep on writing

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Review #3, by Kayceebee Welcome Home

20th June 2004:
Aw this story is so great! Update soon

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Review #4, by Peaches and Pie Wrongs Would be Righted

30th May 2004:
Well that's a good peice of work. Keep anymore chapters coming though.

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Review #5, by Peaches and Pie Welcome Home

30th May 2004:
One little bit of info. Hogwarts express leaves at 11 not 9.

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Review #6, by dementorsfiend Welcome Home

16th May 2004:
WOW cool story! Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Review #7, by dementorsfiend Welcome Home

16th May 2004:
WOW cool story! Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Review #8, by kimtastic07 Wrongs Would be Righted

14th May 2004:
fantastic!!!! especially the joke chapter....hehe...but the chapters need to be longer and, of course, have more of them!!! hehe

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Review #9, by ball_of_fluff Wrongs Would be Righted

14th May 2004:
i like the story, though it is doing more telling than showing. its also moving a little too fast for me to keep up (maybe that's just me though) update soon

Author's Response: I know!! I'm going to have to work on that one... haha

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Review #10, by ball_of_fluff Tear Stained

14th May 2004:
oooooooooooooh i like the cliffhanger ending. the part about fred and george and their new creation was genius.

Author's Response: haha ooh yeah baby...I need some of those Granny's Gas Givers myself...

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Review #11, by ball_of_fluff The Misfortune

14th May 2004:
good job, getting more interesting

Author's Response: yeehaw

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Review #12, by ball_of_fluff Welcome Home

14th May 2004:
hey, glad to see more daisy FF. I like it, it is off to a good start. Though I would like to see the chapters a little longer.

Author's Response: workin on it!

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Review #13, by me, the infamous Wrongs Would be Righted

12th May 2004:
Please don't have Hermione fall for Harry! Instead Ron! Great, Good, grand chappie!!!

Author's Response: Haha actually that was the hardest part, deciding where she was going to turn to...BUT I can say that you won't be disappointed (although it might not be Ron..) I promise!

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Review #14, by me, the infamous Welcome Home

12th May 2004:
WHAT? I'm gonna KILL you if you killed off Ron!!!

Author's Response: haha well I guess you'll have to keep reading to find out what happens! Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #15, by Yahtzee10290 Welcome Home

12th May 2004:
wow, I really really like this story! Post soon...poor Ron! post or I'll be very very sad...it's getting better and better! (wow i'm really into doubles arent i?)

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Review #16, by JuliaGranger Welcome Home

11th May 2004:
Cool story! Update! ;-) Would you give me some feedback on mine? Thanks...

Author's Response: Well, firstly, thanks for the review...and I can't find your story...sorry...

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Review #17, by misschievous007 Welcome Home

11th May 2004:
Thanks you guys so much for reviewing, and any suggestions/comments are welcome as well!

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Review #18, by JayCee Wrongs Would be Righted

11th May 2004:
This story is really good and I cant wait to see what happens. Please Update.

Author's Response: Thanks! Keep reading!

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Review #19, by Lucille266 Tear Stained

11th May 2004:
very good story carry on.

Author's Response: thanks so much, its my first story...so its great to know that people are enjoying it!

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Review #20, by julie-san The Misfortune

10th May 2004:
Hey, good story! I'd like to re read it when i have more time. Put up more chapters! (and make them longer!) hp is known for amazingly long chapters, hehe.

Author's Response: thanks!!

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Review #21, by kabeesters Welcome Home

10th May 2004:
yeah...its really good, but make the chapter longer! (thats a good thing...it means i like it..)

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Review #22, by ChocolateHorses The Misfortune

10th May 2004:
Good, good cliffy, yea, I would leave a longer review, but I'm short on time! Keep up the good work, try and make chappys longer! Good luck to you! ~The ChocolateHorse

Author's Response: Alright, thanks for the support/advice!...I'm having trouble with length...I'm trying to keep readers interested and have more than just plot after plot at the same time...

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