Oh, please continue!!! Report Review
I really like this! You should continue it with the help of a beta. . .I'm a huge AD/MM ship, so you'll be my best friend if you pick this back up!!! Report Review
I LOVE your storys well i love the ones with minerva and albus as lovers! plzzzzzzzzz do more like that!! Report Review
YAY CONTINUE!!! WEEEEEE this is really good Report Review
First of all, you REALLY need a Beta...a lot is two words, Professor is misspelled, and why are there little slashes / before every " or ' ?This fic could have potential...but the glaring mistakes and awkward //'s take so much away from it... AL Report Review
Me likey! I can imagine him writing multiple drafts for a letter! He's so head over heals in love! Fawkes was good too. I really thought he was going to zoom through the window and smack the wall! One question, do you have a Beta? I noticed a few things here or there and would love to beta for you! Never done it before,but there's a first time for everything! Report Review
Lovely start. Don't stop there! The punctuation is a little confusing. Report Review
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