This was really nice and sweet! I mean, the language is really good, and I can see how you wanted it to sound, there were just a lot of spelling mistakes. ^_^

But anyways, I really liked it. It's short and simple, but it really does say a lot. Good job!

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umm...

not great

but

not bad

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This was very insightful...I like it!! Good job!

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I spent a good time reading it!

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What that \'wise person\' once told her is so true about how the right choice always isn\'t the easiest. Very good idea...did you come up with that yourself? If you did, that is quite amazing. Great job and fantastic style. XD

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wow that was really good! I like your writing! you are very talented so please keep writing!!!!! thank you for reading my story! Chapter 12 is now up! please read and review!!!!!

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I like this. You got inside Mcgonnagall\'s head very well inside this. I can\'t wait to see what you come up with next. Keep going. You\'ve got a real good start here.

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Wow, this is very insightful. A nice look into her mind. Thanks for plugging my site, btw. Excellent job.

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ooh deep.like it so far.It\'s very true,hogwarts kids are her children. please review go ask ginny or the diary of severus snape

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woah, thats great, you have to write more. and if you want to join the new story archive, email the Admin and tell him you do

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