{reviewid: 1744641, reviewer: 'JamesPotter1992'}
8th December 2007:
Amazing.. never would have expected this
WELL DONE!
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{reviewid: 1744633, reviewer: 'JamesPotter1992'}
8th December 2007:
Wow.. Loved it =] Very Good
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{reviewid: 852196, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
Scary children. Good chapter. I wish you would update here. I really, really, really wish you would.
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{reviewid: 852194, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
Good chapter! I really like how this part is turningn out.
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{reviewid: 852192, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
That is so sad. Good story so far. I like the explanations for everything.
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{reviewid: 852190, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
That was veryyyy dramatic. And a bit scary. Good job!
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{reviewid: 852189, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
Whatt? I'm confused. Now this isn't making too much sense. Good chapter.
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{reviewid: 852188, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
Thumbing a Ride sounds like the Hitchhickers Guide to the Galaxy. Good chapter. I like how it's taken a turn for the possibilities.
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{reviewid: 852185, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
What are Hermione and Snape doing there, besides driving the other up the wall? Good chapter.
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{reviewid: 852183, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
Yup. The dangers of meddling with time. You are like I sometimes, in writing in little things and making them huge, like Dumbledore's warning to not meddle with it unless necessary. Good chapter.
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{reviewid: 852181, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
Good chapter. It's interesting, your ideas with meddling with time. Good chapter.
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{reviewid: 852179, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
What is the Rubicon? I'm excited to learn alll of these new terms. Good chapter!
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{reviewid: 852175, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
Ooh, the end of the chapter was creepy. Good one!
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{reviewid: 852171, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
Good chapter! I really liked how you had the contest. Even though I did not partake in the fun, it showed that you were not just some typing maniac that wanted just reviews. I'm glad that you interact with your readers. Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter. The way that this is a complete other world is fascinating.
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{reviewid: 852169, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
Wow. I seriously thought that imaginary world would be a one time thing. Guess it's pretty big.
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{reviewid: 852165, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
Good chapter. Good Eats is a television show. Did you know that? Anyway, I liked how you had the Pop tarts and whatnot in here.
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{reviewid: 852162, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
Lovely sibling sharing. Haha. I hope Molly and Arthur will not blab about it. . . Good chapter!
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{reviewid: 852147, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
Good chapter. I like how Luna was sort of fishing for compliements at the end, even though she was just wondering. This will be a cute story. Good chapter.
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{reviewid: 852144, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
Evil is awful. Especially the meddling in love sort of evil. Good chapter!
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{reviewid: 852071, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
Ooooooh, maybe they'll find something in the attic that will make it so they can time travel!! Good chapter, I liked it very much.
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{reviewid: 852065, reviewer: 'Sophia%20Montgomery'}
10th January 2006:
Wow! That chapter was very amusing at first, but then you dove into the story. Good first chapter! I can't wait to read the rest.
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{reviewid: 594589, reviewer: 'ExLyN99'}
14th July 2005:
Thos was a really good chapter, too! Keep it up!
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{reviewid: 593665, reviewer: 'ExLyN99'}
14th July 2005:
That was amazing, love this story! It made me cry a little, since I know Luna's mother is going to die. But anyway, good job!!
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{reviewid: 478457, reviewer: 'MercuryBlue'}
27th April 2005:
You need to fix the duplicate chapters.
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15th November 2004:
nice writing but i m sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo confused...lyl lyl
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