Reading Reviews for Naive Neave
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by EmmyBacon Chapter Three: Greenhouse glass and broomsticks

15th March 2018:
Oh Neave.
I love her.
Her attitude to life is just remarkable.
Loyal and dedicated almost to a fault, an incredible friend and a powerful ally!

Danny knowing Remus would be there was rather odd. and I'm interested to find out Remus' reaction to his own feelings in this chapter.

Great update, keep up the great work
EmmyBacon xx

 Report Review

Review #2, by lilac_snapdragon Chapter Two: Potions Partners

3rd March 2018:
I'm really enjoying this story so far :)

Peter and Neave's friendship is super sweet and I hope his little double-agent role doesn't end up hurting that. It was interesting to see how she got on with Snape and their friendship-of-sorts too. They seem quite close (but maybe that's just Remus's jealous streak giving us that idea).

I can't wait to see what kind of plan they've come up with to get that notebook and I'm super excited to see how the story progresses.


Author's Response: Sorry for the delay in reply. I was changing internet providers and there was a few issues! Good news is I've had time to write chapter 3 which I'll be putting in for validation today. Thank you for the lovely feedback! It means a lot that your enjoying the story so far :) The parts you pointed out were my favourite bits to write in this chapter.
Hope you find time to review chapter 3 when it's posted :)

 Report Review

Review #3, by EmmyBacon Chapter Two: Potions Partners

3rd March 2018:
Brilliant update!

I LOVED Pete as a little double agent. It makes so much sense.

And your portrayal of Sirius is brilliant. Just little snippets to get his personality.

I'm wondering what this connection with Neave and Snape will be. Looking forward to reading more!

Let's find out how they get that notebook!

Brill stuff

Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry for the late reply I've had no internet for a week! Good news is its given me time to write chapter 3. All the bits you've mentioned were so fun to write I'm really starting to see parts of the story take shape :)

 Report Review

Review #4, by EmmyBacon Chapter One: The worst stalker in the world

26th February 2018:
Nice concept.

I'm looking forward to where you're taking this. Great job =)

Author's Response: Aw my first review! Thanks for the support I've just put chapter two into submission. Hopefully you'll like seeing a bit more of the characters interactions!

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login