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Review #1, by EmmyBacon I Want To (And Will) Break Free!

6th February 2018:
Great insight into Sirius' feelings and thought and this budding crush.

I also really liked the twins connection here 😊

Great stuff
EmmyBacon xx

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! There will definatly be more of the twins in the upcoming chapters. Thanks!

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Review #2, by Alexel Writes  Sixth Year

5th February 2018:
Oh my goodness! I really did not expect the shout out! Thank you so much! Wow! I am full of blushes! :D

I loved this new take on your characters- they are all the same but different. I am curious to see how things go for the twins and this brewing Sirius thing definitely has my interest turned up to full. I like that there is a more adult feel. I also love how unapologetic Violet is about herself. A proper girl boss.

As always, I loved it and I need more and thank you so much for the mention.

xxx

Author's Response: I'm glad you appreciated it! I'm going to have the next chapter up soon. I'm so happy you like the way I'm writing it. I find that many fanfictions have the main character as a shy, super nice person who practically everyone loves. I wanted to make sure mine wasn't like that and it's super great to know you appreciate that.

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Review #3, by EmmyBacon Sixth Year

2nd February 2018:
I love the comradery between the group. The may not always show it (James mimicking Violet on the train) but the relationship is built on mutual respect and joy. I love that.

Violet is such a confident character. And I love the fact the relationship with the twins has changed!

Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! It really means a lot. I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I plan to have a new chapter up soon!

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Review #4, by Alexel Writes School Supplies and Train Rides

30th January 2018:
This was so cute and so great! James is actually so sweet and it is really lovely to see Violet coming into herself. I love how exciting everything is for them. There are already so many connections between them. I am so curious to see how this all develops. Great work!

xxx
A

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it! This is the first fanfiction I've posted and I wasn't sure how it was turning out. Thanks so much for the telling me what you think. I really appreciate it.

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Review #5, by iDontRemember The new girl

18th January 2018:
Could you update please?It is very interesting

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! The next chapter should be up soon.

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Review #6, by iDontRemember The new girl

18th January 2018:
Could you update please?It is very interesting

Author's Response: Thank you for reading!

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Review #7, by Alexel Writes  The new girl

17th January 2018:
Hi there!

I just wanted to pop in and tell you that you have really interesting characterisation. I really like the way you crafted the twins.
The change between the Points of View is also interesting, I think it allows for a really holistic sort of view when it comes to a situation and knowing the minds of both characters is great.
I am really curious to see how this plays out, from the blurb it sounds great.

Keep at it!

xxx
A

Author's Response: Thanks for the feed back! It's really appreciated.

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