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Review #1, by DougA Chapter One

24th November 2017:
For a first attempt at creative writing, it is very well done. I am surprised that Harry was able to slip off after the Battle, but it's nice that it is Ginny that finds him, especially without Ron and Hermione in the mix. Very nice use of the patronus, and nice of you to remember that hers is a horse. Most stories I've read have had hers already change to match Harry's, as either a doe to his stag, or both of theirs having morphed to a lion and lioness. Also nice is their comforting of each other. Very well done. I will be watching.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your kind words :) I was worried about taking Harry away from them, but due to his close relationship with Dumbledore I felt he should return the Elder wand alone. In much the same way I feel Ginny is the only who can actually console Harry - that was my reasoning. I'm half way through the next chapter, should be uploaded in the next few days. Thank you again so much for the kind words, it is greatly appreciated! :)

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