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Review #1, by SiriusAura92 Chapter 1: An Introduction

15th November 2017:
Hi there!

Firstly, welcome to HPFF!!! :D
You've got an interesting story here and I really am loving the background of it all, but I would recommend just slowing down and taking your time. All of this lovely information should take up about two separate chapters at least to allow us to take it all in.
Set your scene, describe your character(s) and then ease us in to where we find your characters. It'll make it so much more satisfying to read and I can promise you it'll be more satisfying to write.

Well done and definitely keep up the great work!

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