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Reading Reviews for Of Fate
  
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Avanell 2 BROWN: of Seed

15th October 2017:
Wow! Excellent update! I've noticed some errors in the chapter, but who cares...not enough to stop the lovely flow of things! Love it! Love especially how he came to visit Hermione in the hospital wing!

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Review #2, by Avanell 2 BROWN: of Knowledge

15th October 2017:
Lovely update! Loved when he noticed her, and then how he thought Crabbe and Goyle ARE his own house elves, lol.

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Review #3, by AppreciativeReader BROWN: of Seed

13th October 2017:
Loved this chapter very much. I am already in love with this story and the characters play out real well.
Will continue to flow and look forward to updates.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I appreciate the kind words.

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Review #4, by Avanell 2 BLUE: of Memory

7th October 2017:
Very lovely introduction! How curious that Narcissa brought him to the place and his wonderful, delightful meeting Hermione! Loved her reading and then their playing...and he gave her the dragon! Awesome. Somehow, I thought he was going to get a real dragon that would grow and be wise, pointing him in her direction, lol.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Narcissa has some depth/importance in this one. Though, not immediately.

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Review #5, by DrHong  BLUE: of Memory

4th October 2017:
Okey first I just want to mention that the first chapter has me hooked and can't wait for more. Secondly, do you mean dark brown hair? Hermione doesn't have dark blonde hair to my general knowledge. Lastly I like how you portrayed Lucius Malfoy, too many fanfiction portray him like some sort of abuser when in reality Malfoys are known for putting family above all else.

Author's Response: Thanks! Happy you liked it. In terms of Hermione's hair, I always liked the idea of her hair darkening over time. They're only 6, so figured it'd be at that stage. And yeah, trying to imagine the Malfoy home life is a bit tricky.

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Review #6, by AppreciativeReader BLUE: of Memory

3rd October 2017:
Loved the beginning. Would continue to look for updates in future.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying to update as quickly as possible, hopefully at most 2 weeks between chapters.

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Review #7, by Madzitron BLUE: of Memory

1st October 2017:
This is so freaking cute! And very well written.

Author's Response: Thank you!


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