Reading Reviews for Shards ( ON HOLD. )
5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by jjbear I don't understand!

13th March 2018:
Hi! I really like this story (even if it only has two chapters so far), I swear I'm already emotionally invested in this. Except I Couldn't help but notice it's on hold? Are you having writers block, or have you decided to discontinue the story? I really hope you haven't! Alice is the cutest thing ever, and I want to see more of your james (preferably being romantic with alice) and this story just makes me laugh a lot (scorpius and alice)!

~ Jo ~

Author's Response: Wotcher Jo!

I'm really glad you loved this story so much! To answer your questions, yes this story is on hold as of now. I had big plans for this entire story, but I was debating changing it to a different timeline. For example, making it set post-hogwarts and having them both interact over James marriage to another girl with a corresponding timeline of the past between Alice and him.

Alas, I dubbed the idea a cliche in the end and it lies at the bottom of the waste bin. So instead I'm just going to vastly improve and heavily edit these first two chapters (they're written too sloppily for my tastes) before progressing down this same timeline and plot. Staying on this topic once the two chapters have updated, I'd like to politely suggest you should reread them because they'll include extra scenes and others may be deleted.

Thank you SO much for the lovely words expressed in the review, it means a lot!

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Review #2, by Anonymous I don't understand!

20th October 2017:
Amazing chapter! I absolutely love Alice and James and canít wait to find out what happened between them. Scorpius was completely hilarious and his relationship development with Rose should be great. Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Aw, this made my day, thank you so much! I'll do my best to update, until then hang in there!!

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Review #3, by BBHP I don't understand!

18th October 2017:
I've been anxiously awaiting an update for this story! And it was excellent. The relationship between James and Alice is so good. I'm dying to know what happened between them.

Scorpius might be one of my top favorites though. Can't wait for more Scorpius/Rose stuff (and obviously Alice/James!).

Author's Response: It's actually kind of pathetic how proud of myself I was to finally post another chapter after WEEKS, lol.

Anyway, thank you so much! I'm glad your enjoying the story. I adore Scorpius, too! Be sure to keep both eyes open for a little Scorose action ;)

Your review made my day, no lie. I'm working on a long chapter that will hopefully be up soon, plenty full of Alice/James, but you'll have to hang in there a little longer to know what happened between them (sorry!).

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Review #4, by m Genderbent James Bond?

9th October 2017:
i love teddy and the mc is so cute. i hope james and her reconcile soon (: x

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I did my best, and we'll see if Alice and James ever decide to move past their unrevealed past ;)

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Review #5, by BBHP Genderbent James Bond?

1st October 2017:
More, more! I like your Alice. Can't wait to see more of James, and to learn what exactly he did.

Author's Response: Aw, thank so much for reviewing! I have big plans for our adorable Jamsie, and i'll try my best to have the next chapter up in time.

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