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16 Reviews Found

Review #1, by LilyPotterEvans1976 The Legion (Prologue Part 2)

7th September 2017:
awww *sniff* that was beautiful, i think it needs at least one more chapter though, the fight with moldy shorts, and Harry and Hermione finally kissing, or something... but other than that i love this story, very captivating xx

Author's Response: Thanks, and thanks for all your reviews. It was probably a mistake but I deliberately avoided the final battle in this story. But you're right. Definitely should have made more of their final parting. Thanks again.

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Review #2, by LilyPotterEvans1976 Return

7th September 2017:
How could Hermione ever repay Harry for saving her parents, that was a beautiful chapter, i'm so happy they are alive and reunited, makes my heart happy :)

Author's Response: Thanks. It worked out in the end despite Harry's recklessness. Thanks again.

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Review #3, by LilyPotterEvans1976 Hedwig Returns

6th September 2017:
ohhh what does he find... i'm glad he frees Hagrid yay, good going Harry

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, Hagrid is important to Harry so he would have been targeted too. Thanks again.

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Review #4, by LilyPotterEvans1976 The Test

6th September 2017:
i don't like the sound of this unfeeling Harry, i feel the dementor has tricked him in some way, not good at all

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, but being Harry it probably won't be permanent. Thanks again.

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Review #5, by LilyPotterEvans1976 Taken

6th September 2017:
Awww poor Mione... i'm bloody crying here, what a thing to happen, just want to give her a huge hug...my girl

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, very sad. Thanks again.

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Review #6, by LilyPotterEvans1976 Ron the Spy

6th September 2017:
im happy the boys made up, i still think Rons a git though

Author's Response: Thanks. Ha! And this time Harry was a bit stupid not to want to listen. Thanks again.

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Review #7, by LilyPotterEvans1976 Mrs Figg’s

6th September 2017:
i never thought i would read a story with 'inteligent' dementors...this is really good xxx

Author's Response: Thanks. Well, it was an idea worth exploring. Thanks again.

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Review #8, by LilyPotterEvans1976 Obsessions

6th September 2017:
someone in her family has been killed??? her parents??? poor mione xxx

Author's Response: Thanks. Well, it isn't entirely clear what happened yet. Thanks again.

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Review #9, by LilyPotterEvans1976 Fudge

6th September 2017:
Interesting, very interesting xxx

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, I thought Fudge would want to do the right thing and help Harry. Thanks again.

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Review #10, by LilyPotterEvans1976 A Personal Invitation

6th September 2017:
Ron is a git, but he is right, Hermione did dump him for Harry, and rightly so, he is the best choice for her... good stuff xx

Author's Response: Thanks. Well, Ron may regret his insensitive words. Thanks again.

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Review #11, by LilyPotterEvans1976 Inept

6th September 2017:
She is in love with you Harry, what is so difficult to see...but she's scared to tell you... so sweet, love it xxx

Author's Response: Thanks. Ha!

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Review #12, by LilyPotterEvans1976 The Index

6th September 2017:
interesting, the plot thickens... love it xx

Author's Response: Thanks. yes, indeed! Thanks again.

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Review #13, by LilyPotterEvans1976 Scruffy Urchin

6th September 2017:
ohhh very interesting, i like it a lot, this story is fasinating 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks. Harry was too pleased to see her and should perhaps have questioned Hermione's earlier than anticipated arrival. Thanks again.

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Review #14, by LilyPotterEvans1976 Hungry, Were You?

6th September 2017:
That was a nice scene with Harry and his aunt, i feel they bonded a little, very nice xxx

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, I thought Harry and Petunia would make things up in the end. Thanks again.

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Review #15, by LilyPotterEvans1976 Two Memories?

6th September 2017:
hmmm, interesting, if she had the memory on her already, what was with the spell...was she confunded? interesting... must read more xx

Author's Response: Thanks. Yes, I thought Dumbledore would have anticipated something happening before he had the chance to tell Harry everything and security would be a problem. Thanks again.

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Review #16, by LilyPotterEvans1976 Gringotts (Prologue Part 1)

6th September 2017:
I like it, interesting start, loving the whole bromance with the boys... 10/10 x

Author's Response: Thanks. Ha! Well, it was important to show they remained friends despite the events of the summer. Thanks again.

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