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Review #1, by Alexel Writes September 1, 1976: Part II

23rd November 2017:
Hi!
I really love your Remus. Heís interestingly complex. And I love the way youíve created such strong female characters. Well done! Iím curious about what happens next.

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Review #2, by MRL M September 5, 1976

22nd July 2017:
I'm really enjoying this story so far. I like your portrayal of the Marauders - I find it to be more believable than some other fanfics yet still incredibly charming. I'm also intrigued by Margot - can't wait to find out more about her!
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for review. It means so much.

I'm trying to make the boys relatable and flawed. It's a challenge because I love all of my babies and I want them to be perfect. The toughest part is making Peter a likable character. One of my biggest pet peeves is when Peter is portrayed as a horrible person from the get-go. I want him to be worthy of being one of James and, eventually, Lily's best friends.

I am kinda in love with Margot, tbh. Her and Remus are my favorites. I have to actively stop myself from turning then into Mary Sues and make sure I write about the other characters.

Again, thank you for your review. I think chapter four will be vaildated tomorrow.

Love,
Erin


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