Reading Reviews for Social Disposition
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Review #1, by insertcreativeusername Letís All Cry Over Spilt Milk

25th October 2017:
Lovely update, your chapters always bring a smile to my face.

I've said it before, but for the sake of stressing my point I'll say it again, I am in love with your characters! My favorite part would have to be where the first year swore at Maisie and Ray went off at him, lol.

Though the scene with Albus comes a close second. Their banter is so cute, and I can't wait till the part where they begin to have romantic inclinations towards each other, or atleast till Albus starts to play a more prominent role in the story.

Can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully you'll post it soon!

Author's Response: I'm so sorry that I never replied to this, I honestly thought I had!
I'm so happy that you love the characters, I really am. To me personally whether it be a film, a book or a TV show, I can never truly love it unless I adore the characters. I can really enjoy them and appreciate the storylines and the writing but I never love them as much as the ones where perhaps the writing isn't quite as good but I absolutely adore the characters because I get so emotionally invested. That was a rather long-winded and rambled way of saying, it's important to me that you say you love the characters so thank youuu!
That was a fun scene to write, actually this entire fic is just so much fun to write. I'm glad you like Albus and their scenes, I'm quite enjoying their dynamic at the moment, I do love a good love/hate type fic. And yes he shall start appearing more soon, I'm just trying to set up her friend group and all their personalities at the minute because it can be a bit of a handful having that many characters to work with. In hindsight I probably should have made it smaller but I love them so you know.

Again, I apologise for taking so long not only with this reply but with this fic in general. I have a feeling you left another review in which you mentioned reading my other fic hopeless manifestations (sorry if it wasn't you I probably should check ahah) but I'm so so close to finishing a chapter of that one and it's about 8k words so its not a short chapter either so hopefully that will keep you going for a bit :)

I've got a third of the next chapter of this down but don't worry I definitely haven't given up!
Thanks for leaving a review and I hope you enjoy the future chapters!

~ Charlie ~

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Review #2, by insertcreativeusername Blurred Colours

25th October 2017:
Wow, I love all the characters you've created! They're hilarious and their friendship is so humorous and I dunno..real? I suppose I really loved this because the girls are literally my friends (Is it weird if I'm the Ray of the group?).

I loved your OC's thoughts/personality. Great duel between her and Albus, btw. Really captivating, and merlin, her cheeky comment at the end? Comedy GOLD!

I'm a fan of your other story Hopeless Manifestations, and that's how I came across this one, and man I'm glad I did! Love it, I hope you'll complete it soon!

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much, this review means a lot and they really make me smile, sorry it's taken a few days to reply! I'm so glad you love the characters, I kinda wanted to shove a load of completely different characters together and like play with that dynamic as I thought it would be a lot more fun than a bunch of people who get on perfectly and are really similar. I knew from the start I wanted to have a main character (which in this case is clary) but I didn't want all the others to be there purely to support her storyline, I wanted them to have storylines and loud personalities too.
Ahahah I'm glad you like the humour and that comment at the end, she's not a one for sitting back and letting people humiliate her, if they do that she'll do it back ten times worse.
It really makes me happy know that you liked HM enough to come over and read another of my stories and love that too so thank you! HM was always a more serious darker fic so I wanted to let out all my humour and lighthearted ideas in another fic and hence this was born.
Also I don't know if you noticed that I had another fic out about rose and scorpius, prewarning: I really wouldn't bother with that one. It's abandoned for a start, its badly written the characters are bland and it just wasn't great so I'm dissecting it a little and using it to create some of the scenes for this because I didn't like the fic as a wholebut I kinda liked some scenes/lines.
Don't worry I haven't given up on them, I'm about halfway through the next chapter of both this and HM and I'm also working on the prologue for a new fic which I think is going to be my big main story that I write, I've spent about six months character profiling, world building and just writing the prologue and I never normally plan all that much before I write so that's something. Although I love writing hopeless manifestations and social disposition and don't want to give up on them, I feel like they're kind of practise for this new story so I hope when I finally get it out it doesn't disappoint ahah.
Anyways this review has given me quite a bit of motivation and since I'm on a two hour train journey right now I think I'll get some writing done now :)

~ Charlie ~

PS. I saw that you've left another review (thank you so much ahah) and I'll get a little more writing done then I'll reply to that too :)

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Review #3, by Tecla Sunrise Blurred Colours

10th July 2017:
Ah! loved it, particularly the mic-drop at the end! keep going :)

Author's Response: Thank you for leaving a review, I'm really pleased that you've enjoyed this chapter. As for the end, Clary had to get the last word, plus she wanted to take his ego down a notch or two ahah. I'm working on chapter two and hope to have it up soon :)

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Review #4, by Cami Blurred Colours

9th July 2017:
I'm hooked, that was an amazing first chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Aw thanks, I'm glad you loved it. I was worried that it would be a bit of an overload of characters ahah. I'm halfway through chapter two so you shouldn't have to wait for long to see more :)

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