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Reading Reviews for Changes and Secrets
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Tidbit Marauders confront Dumbledore

26th July 2017:
I didn't think it was draggy... Ive enjoyed your story do far... wish it had more chapters...

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for your review:)
I will post future chapters soon. I've already posted a few more chapters on Fanfiction for this fic.

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Review #2, by LilyPotterEvans1976 Marauders confront Dumbledore

25th July 2017:
Ohh ohh ohh ohh that was juicy, even Harry got in on the roasting, i liked it, please post more soon

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for your review:)
lol, true! I will post future chapters soon.

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Review #3, by LilyPotterEvans1976 The Marauders discuss Dumbledore!

25th July 2017:
That Dumbledore, never gives up does he, i'm with James, no kid of mine would go to those horrible people.

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Review #4, by LilyPotterEvans1976 James is still alive!

25th July 2017:
Interesting, like it so far, interested to see where this leads

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Review #5, by Dobbyandginn The Marauders discuss Dumbledore!

7th July 2017:
Okay i like it so far and a twin sister sounds like a good good thing to put in. Also i personally would like longer Chapters because i feel they are just too short right now.

I understand about the Dumbledore being a git but not evil, also can you change it into Ron Bashing i never liked him until he returned in the Deathley Hallows when he saved Harry and he grew up.

But overall i like it so far and i am looking forward to future chapters.

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for your review:) I am so sorry for the late reply. I agree. Dumbledore is not evil here, I just made him a little more manipulative for the sake of the plot.
I will be posting future chapters soon, but I have already posted a few more chapters on Fanfiction for this fic. I've added a twin sister, but in the most logical way I could think.

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Review #6, by PendleWizard James is still alive!

26th June 2017:
An interesting idea and I look forward to seeing how it develops.

I'm not entirely convinced by Dumbledore's role in detaining them: I don't think he'd do it; I don't think he'd have the power to do it; and I'm sure the sentence for an illegal animagus would only be six months or so. Eighteen months tops.

One glaring Americanism: In Britain, a porch is a covered entrance: either a small roof over a door (and perhaps somewhere to sit to put your boots on) or a small anteroom - somewhere to put muddy boots and wet coats. What Americans call a porch, we call a verandah, but they are very rare. They're generally found on cricket pavilions or seaside bungalows. The Dursleys definitely wouldn't have one.

Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much for your review:) Ya, I know Dumbledore in canon would probably not do it. But for the purpose of my story, I made his character a little more manipulative.
I know the term for an illegal animagus should rightfully be much shorter than 7 years, but I made it longer for the purpose of this story. Plus, we were never really told how severe the crime of being an illegal animagus is.
Dumbledore did have some pull at the ministry. He had order of Merlin First Class, was chief warlock and part of the Wizengamot. So in my story, I made it so that he was influential enough to meddle. I apologize if you found any part of my story illogical.
I apologize for the term, porch. I forgot it was an American term. I'm not very familiar with the American and British distinctions. I usually use the terms I'm accustomed to, whether British or American. I'm from Malaysia. While we mostly use British English here, there's also a slight use of American terms instead.

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