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Review #1, by dracoismyboyfriendguys A New Start

21st June 2017:
Hi, just thought I'd share some thoughts! Congrats on completing your first chapter of a new story! This does need a little editing, however. Firstly, would Hogwarts really do acceptance via email? I'm confused, why didn't Chelsea receive her letter when she was 11? Even if she didn't know she was a witch, surely the ministry would have? She also seemed to adapt to the idea of magic and her father being a wizard very quickly! Hopefully you'll explore that in a bit more depth!
Well done again!
Alice xxx

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