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Reading Reviews for Blue Skies and Red Sun
  
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Avanell 2 Finding a date for Christmas ball II

2nd July 2017:
Another fun update, but some wrong partners for sure!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!! >//u//<

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Review #2, by Avanell 2 Finding a date for Christmas ball

2nd July 2017:
Very cute and sweet update...just wish it had been Hermione to stick her wand at Malfoy, lol.

Author's Response: Thank you >/< For sure she will if she's not distracted. :D

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Review #3, by Avanell 2 A Gryffindor Dare

23rd June 2017:
Fun chapter! But why don't the girls know of the bet if ALL Griff's participate? Loved how Ron ended up triumphant in his dare, but poor Harry. Would be a good time for Snape to come clean about Lily.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading >/< As for the girls and the other Gryffs not knowing about the dare it's because no one in the Gryffindors knew about Harry, ROn, Nev, Seamus and Dean doing the tradition dare. The Gryffindor Dare can be done any time of the year while at Hogwarts and must be kept a secret. Their housemates find out later about it.

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Review #4, by TheViperJono A Gryffindor Dare

22nd June 2017:
Man! This is a great introduction to this story! I've loved it. I couldn't stop laughing my a$$ off when I read about both dares.

It's nice to see a story about Harry having a normal life and having normal schooling experiences.

I look forward to seeing more from you with this story.

Well deserved A+ in my books.

Don't keep us waiting for the next update. Make yourself a schedule for posting new chapters. This way, you will keep loyal readers like myself interested in this story.

Don't be like the others. Don't just post chapters whenever you feel like it. There are many great stories out there that have the potential to become great. The only flaw is that the authors do not update their stories regularly. Then they mark the the story as abandoned. These authors take absolutely no pride in their storytelling. They leave stories that are potentially great and ruin them by taking long breaks between chapters. For example take the runaway returns series. That story had the potential of greatness. However, the author has stopped updating the story. The last update was approximately a year and a half ago.

Do not be that guy. Keep updating regularly. Like say once a week. Always do the same day of the week(like every Friday). It does not matter if your home country has a holiday. Keep posting updates to keep loyal readers. That is my advice to you.

In conclusion, I must say that you have earned this.

Well done. You deserve praise for your work. I'm definitely going to be keeping my eyes out for this story. I don't say this very often. But when I do.

The author has impressed me.

Congratulations.

Signing off,
TheViperJono

Author's Response: Wow! Thank you very much for your wonderful review. I know how you feel about abondoned fanfictions. I'm left with a broken heart when a beautifully written fanfic is left hanging or abandoned. I'll promise to keep writting and do my best. This is my first fanfiction and the first story I wrote in full English. I'm not good at English, but reading your review gave me confidence to post the next chapters! Again, thank you!

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