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Reading Reviews for Phases of the Moon
  
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Jane Brick by Brick

30th June 2017:
oajfksndfdkjkfenvfnk Delphine Lestrange as Albus's love intrest!

that was a major shocker.

Now I just want to know what happened between Charlie and Albus.

you've gotten me invested in this story now and we're only 3 chapters in :)

can't wait till the next update :)

Author's Response: I am so happy you're enjoying the story so far! I hope you won't be disappointed as more chapters are out ;)

And I knooow, Delphine and Albus! I am so excited about that part.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Maria


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Review #2, by Hasane A Dozen Elephants

29th June 2017:
Oh god I just feel like--god.

Charlie has been through some crap. Like really. And I don't quite empathize but I know what she's feeling. It was a Mistake kissing Albus again, and already from this chapter, my defenses are up. I don't want to like Albus, and it seems I won't, not anytime soon.

You had me fooled there though. The apology was a step up for him. He acknowledged that whatever he did was wrong. But then it all went down the rabbit hole when he kissed her. I feel like if he had really grown, he'd understand that detrimental effects he has on her, and respect and know her boundaries.

From the way she's literally in tears at the thought of seeing him again, I have a slight feeling that the relationship might have been... abusive. It's the feeling I'm getting, but I'm not much informed on the topic, so please correct me if I'm wrong.

Author's Response: Yes, Charlie has definitely been through crap. And even though she's a witch, her problems have nothing to do with magic, so I think alot of people (mostly women) will be able to see themselves in her.

Al is a strange individual. He didn't necessarily set her up on purpose, he's just weak and short-sighted. I am excited to see where he evolves to... I don't know yet.

Hmm, well, I can tell you that there have not been any _physical_ abuse. But more on that later on in the story ;) But there absolutely is something there between them that isn't healthy. And Charlie being afraid of seeing him again has so many reasons behind it, which is also something I'll explain further down the line.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you will continue enjoying this story:D

Maria


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Review #3, by Violet Potter 434 A Dozen Elephants

28th June 2017:
ok
so me being the idiot that I am

didn't realise you already had a second chapter up

yes I am thick

anyways

this was just as great as the last one


keep writing

from me xx

Author's Response: Haha, you're not thick xD

Thank you so much! I'm glad you still like it :) Now, I'm off to write more!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Maria


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Review #4, by Violet Potter 434 Unkempt

28th June 2017:
I need more

this is so exciting
I want to know how he broke her heart

really well written

from me xx

Author's Response: I'm glad you find it exciting! It's very fun to write, that's for sure:)

All questions will be answered later on ;)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Maria


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Review #5, by putitonpaper Unkempt

25th June 2017:
Wow.

So. I read your first paragraph and I had to pause and reread it again. And I said "whoa" out loud. Before moving onto the next paragraph of your story I wrote this down: "Depression. She's describing depression. Even if this isn't someone who is depressed, this is the best paragraph-long description of depression I have read in a long time."

I love that this is about a Patil too. I'm always excited seeing what people do with the lesser known characters and their families especially those who are minorities.

And I find it borderline impossible to write when I'm stressed/dealing with life so I'll probably find myself relating to Charlie's struggles when she's trying to work at the Prophet.

I am so deeply intrigued. I'm like burning to read the next chapter of this.

Author's Response: It is so amazing that your first thought was depression, because that is exactly what started this story.
I am deeply depressed now, you see, and it is in my "darkest hours" that I feel the most inspired to write. So I wrote that first paragraph without intending to do anything else with it. But then it evolved into this story, and now I am brimming with ideas.
So yeah, it is pretty remarkable that you understood right away what I was writing.
And thank you :)

Please keep reading! And let me know what you think!

*Maria


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Review #6, by Tecla Sunrise Unkempt

18th June 2017:
oh, this looks so interesting! can't wait for the next chapter!
and honestly, all it took to get me hooked was "Not at all. Not even a little bit."
May the lord ever keep 'ten things i hate about you' in the rightful glory it possesses.
good job! keep writing, can't wait to see what it happens next ;)

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you so much for writing a review! Haven't had one of these in a while because I haven't written a story in like 4 years, but I have to say it feels dann good to be back :D
I am really inspired with this story, I feel like I'm bursting with new ideas all the time! So I really hope you keep reading and that you keep telling me what you think! I really value your opinion!

And thanks again :)

Maria


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