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Reading Reviews for Cause and Effect
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Op tree Race

16th July 2017:
This is a great start to the story; it is very different and I'm excited to see what happens next.
Carla is a refreshing character as she has her fashionable moments but can also be tough when required. She will definitely be a force to be reckoned with as the story continues.
Overall the characters are all interesting (however, someone really needs to kick James Potter off his high horse) and I really enjoy the plot.

Please update soon!

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Review #2, by Rosie_Posie Race

12th June 2017:

Wonderful first chapter! You really set the scene well and the personalities of the characters. I love Next-gen stories where they are massive rule breakers and partiers because after all without Voldemort Hogwarts is just a magic boarding school to get up to mischief in!

My fave quote was "No dress for poor Carla Shackleton, the crazy girl who drugged kids." too good! I love that Carla is both girly and wants a nice dress but also can battle it out with the best racers on the broom.

Also despite only having really got to see James for 2 lines he is exactly how I love my JP cocky and prattish and smirky.

Hope you update soon,
RP x

Author's Response: Hi again! I love that you took the time to review both of my newborn stories - it means a lot!
and you noticed how i'm trying to defy the usual view that if a girl is girly she can't be nothing else.
we'll see more of him in the next chapter!!
is it obvious that i kind of love him?
;)) xx

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Review #3, by AccioTeddyLupin Race

7th June 2017:
Different and interesting. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!! it's gonna come soon

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Review #4, by Nameless Race

5th June 2017:
Like this! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: thanks! hope you'll like the rest too ;)

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