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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by pointless_proclamations Chapter 1

4th May 2017:

This is one of the most fantastic things I have read ever. The way you've typed up your characterisation is absolutely brilliant—I loved how you so blatantly pointed out the their quirks, but in the most creative way possible. I like how you don't explicitly say that Hermione could straighten her bushy hair with magic, but rather that Hermione is so terrific at magic and she's got this bushy hair she wants to, but doesn't straighten with magic. It's more of a here is fact one, oh and here is fact two, they may or may not have anything to do with each other, you decide.


'The bat of the dungeons.' YOU'RE SO AMAZING.

All the adjectives ever used to describe Snape in one paragraph—genius. His always billowing black robes has brings this image to my mind that there's just some fan somewhere in his classroom and it's sole purpose is to make his robes billow—like some model's hair in a pantene commercial.

Speaking of models. . . Sirius Black. OH MY GOODNESS, MEG. Your descriptions of him are nothing short of phenomenal. I mean, you've always been terrific with descriptions though. ;) Is his glorious mane of perfectly-conditioned hair constantly billowing as a result of some unseen source of wind too?

Emmett, I cannot wait to see where you go with this story because it is truly, truly fantastic—everything you write gets me excited for more of it and this story is no different. So KEEP WRITING BESTESTHPFTBFFSOULSISTERBRAINTWINFRAND BECAUSE YOU'RE FANTASTIC.

Author's Response: EM!!!

Hahaha "here is fact one and here is fact two." That pretty much is how the beginning of this is written, isn't it? XD It's way too much fun to take this trope that I love, and kind of smash it to pieces hahaha.

You have no idea how many Hermione/Snape fics I've read where someone would refer to Snape as "the bat of the dungeons!" Like, what?! Where does that even come from? XD XD

I am dying at this description of my description of Snape! I literally laughed out loud picturing him in like a photo shoot with the fans going!

I *had* to go overboard with Sirius lol. It's only going to become more and more absurd, too! Oh god, imagine Snape and Sirius on the same photo shoot together! Hahaha!

Gah, Em! Emmett is so grateful to you for your kind words, love and encouragement! You is the bestesthpftbffsoulsisterbraintwinfrandfellowsnakeandhornedserpent!!! ♥ ♥

Love and hugs,
Emmett :p

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Review #2, by Bere Chapter 1

4th May 2017:
yay! another read i will love

Author's Response: Aww thank you! I hope you enjoy it! It's going to be so silly haha.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ♥

xoxo Meg

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