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Review #1, by Hasane The Man in the Mask

28th June 2017:
Oh, this was a really nice read! The second person POV was a strange choice, but I think that's part of it's charm! I somehow felt more involved with the story, as if I were the character. But then again, I suppose that's the point!

I really appreciated the friendship between the character and Cho, and the natural curiosity of the character. I think you did really well with showing your character's fear.

Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you liked this! The choice of second person POV was quite experimental for me; I wanted to try it and test its differences from the POVs I was used to writing in. Anyway, it's good to know that it worked positively! Thank you so much for the review! :D

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