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Review #1, by Jinx333 Chapter 9

22nd March 2018:
A kiss?! Ah, sorry I'm fangirling right now haha And on top of all that, there was the unveiling of Jean not being really Jean. Wow, please update whenever you can! I love this :)

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Review #2, by Jinx333 Chapter 8

22nd March 2018:
Awww, Sirius :( So nice to see Sirius portrayed as such a nice guy, despite his obvious frustration with her secrecy intruding on him getting to know her. Also, a panic attack on her birthday sucks majorly. I wish Sirius would have somehow discovered it was her birthday and celebrated in a discrete, sweet way.

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Review #3, by Jinx333 Chapter 6

20th March 2018:
Yet another great chapter! Ooh my, things are really steaming up between Sirius and Hermione. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Your reviews always make me smile!

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Review #4, by Jinx333 Chapter 5

20th March 2018:
You're right that Sirius is being a pain, but also...endearing? Yes, I'm going to go with that. Also, I'm sensing the likelihood of her relationship with Sirius causing waves in the female population (those dirty looks). I hope she'll endure it alright if that's the case. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Definitely endearing! I can't help but just love him.

Thanks for reading and reviewing yet again!

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Review #5, by Jinx333 Chapter 4

17th March 2018:
Poor Hermione...she needs to take better care of herself. I feel like she'd definitely understand just how much Harry had to deal with over the years now. Also, uh-oh, someone's getting busted! How much has Sirius heard? Cannot wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing again! You're so wonderful and I really appreciate it.

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Review #6, by Jinx333 Chapter 1

17th March 2018:
Oooh I like this! I'm trying to make more of an effort to review the stories that help me with my reviews. Woo good karma! Anyhoo, I've rarely read Hermione fanfics, which o now find strange because I love how you write her. To the next chapter!


Author's Response: Hooray for good Karma! I'm glad you're enjoying this story and Hermione. Thanks for reading and reviewing and I hope you continue to read!

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Review #7, by Josephine85 Chapter 9

10th March 2018:
Great that you're back. Love this story. I'm curious what will happen between Hermione and Sirius.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you are enjoying it so far. I was finally struck with inspiration so hoping to be able to sit and write more often.

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Review #8, by Yasmin93 Chapter 8

22nd February 2018:
Just stumbled across this and read the whole thing in one sitting. I'm loving it.

I've never really gotten into the whole Hermione stories but I'm finding the illness caused by the time-turner very interesting.

Loving the interaction between Sirius and Hermione too. I never know if they're going to get along or argue. You're definitely keeping me on my toes.

I really want Sirius to find out what's going on. Hermione needs someone there who understands what she's going through. She doesn't seem to be getting much support from Dumbledore.

Looking forward to reading more!!


Author's Response: You are amazing! Thank you for reading and reviewing :) I'm glad you're finding it interesting, and that you're enjoying the story.

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Review #9, by chasethebutterflies Chapter 7

11th February 2018:
Really like this, I hope you update soon!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I have been working on it slowly but surely, and hope to have a new chapter out soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Review #10, by antixy0u Chapter 7

22nd January 2018:
First marauders based fanfic i've read and i'm now hooked haha

Hooked to another one of your stories!

Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you are enjoying my stories!

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Review #11, by Alexel Writes  Chapter 7

3rd December 2017:
Wow! I just literally blazed through all 7 of these chapters in like an hour.
It's really good. I'm actually so interested in your Sirius, he's totally intruiging and I'm so curious about where the story is going.

I love how irritable your Hermione is- it's almost like in the wake of what happened to her, she's too old for this school boy rubbish and she isn't afraid to let anyone know but she has to be delicate at the same time.

I'm intersted- well done!

All my love- A


Author's Response: You made my day! I've hit a bit of a wall on this story, and it's so nice to hear (read?) that someone is still reading it and enjoying it. Thank you so much! Your observations about Hermione are spot on. She's feeling a bit too mature for all this.

I'm going to try to keep working on this and get more chapters out soon. Thank you again for reading and reviewing!

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Review #12, by PendleWizard Chapter 6

16th May 2017:
Ooh! You spoil us! Another chapter so quickly! I am so enjoying this!

I hope Hermione starts to be kinder to herself or she's not going to be good for anything. She and Sirius are quite deranged, aren't they!

Lily now knows that Jean is home educated and a muggle-born. That's quite an unusual combination. I wonder if anyone will twig that?

Just a small point: I find the phrase 'check [Sirius] out quite jarring and I am ten years younger than he is (albeit I probably had quite a sheltered upbringing). I think I'd have probably said that someone was giving me the once-over (actually it's highly unlikely that they would have been, but you know what I mean!)

Hope that's not too picky - it doesn't spoil this fantastic story!

Author's Response: Thank you for your thoughts! I agree, Hermione and Sirius make quite the pair. I'm glad you caught the part about Hermione being Muggle-born and home schooled. It was a pretty thoughtless slip of mind, and might have planted a seed of suspicion in Lily.

Thanks for the point about "checking out". I'm a small-town American (with a British dad), and I struggle a little with correct phrasing for things. I'll work on that!

Thank you again for keeping up with my story! I'm reaching the end of my pre-written chapters, so things will slow down a little, but I'll try to keep updating semi-regularly.

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Review #13, by PendleWizard Chapter 4

7th May 2017:
Another brilliant chapter! I think you have it bang on: Hermione being so weak and run down and her secret lasting as long as secrets normally last at Hogwarts!

Whatever Sirius has heard, he is going to be like, well, a dog with a bone, isn't he?

Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Thank you! It really means a lot to me that you would take the time to review.

Secrets don't tend to last long at Hogwarts, do they? We'll see how long Hermione's lasts, especially with Sirius *sniffing* around.

"Like a dog with a bone" -- I laughed out loud. Such a perfect depiction of Sirius. I have the next chapter in the queue so it should be up in the very near future.

Thanks again!

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Review #14, by Leebees85 Chapter 3

3rd May 2017:
Can't wait for the next chapter. So far I really like this story and this chapter in particular because she interacts with so many people who she isn't supposed to know yet. I kinda feel a Hermione/Sirius relationship possibly brewing and that's fine by me because I think younger Sirius would be a good match for Hermione.

I'm looking forward to see how she acts around Remus, and I wonder if he'll be as suspicious as Sirius. More so I can't wait to see if hermione can keep herself in check around Pettigrew, I for one would secretly hex him just in spite of what he will do, but I'm kind of bitter about it.

Thank you for these chapters, looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you for reading my story and leaving a great review! It's always exciting to know that people are enjoying it.

There might be a Hermione/Sirius relationship in the works...but you'll have to wait and see! ;) I agree though, I think younger Sirius would be good for Hermione.

I have the next chapter in the works, so keep an eye out for that!

Thanks again!

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Review #15, by PendleWizard Chapter 3

2nd May 2017:
I'm really enjoying this and am itching to read more!

I love the way Hermione is struggling to act like a stranger. It would be so hard to un-know things, even to remember what you were supposed to know and not know, wouldn't it? I think they way you've got her bumbling about is brilliant. I just know she's going to commit some humungous faux pas before long - calling James Harry or Snape Professor. Do we get to hear her interacting with dear Snivellus soon?

You've go the Marauders about right, too, I think. I mean, she's stumbled out of the forest acting oddly and doesn't seem able to answer simple questions like what her name is. And her clothing and manner of speech would be slightly odd (and a bit American) to them - Britain was a lot less cosmopolitan in 1977. She'd definitely seem more than a bit weird. Sirius is determined to find out more about her. Yes he would be, wouldn't he? What is he going to find out?

James feels true, too - all that self-assured mickey taking. It'll be interesting to read how Remus takes to her, once he's no longer indisposed.

All in all, this is a thumping good read. Here's to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for your great review! It really makes me feel great when people take the time to not only read my story, but to compliment it as well.

Hermione is pretty fun to write. But the Marauders are actually really difficult! Their personalities are so different and strong, and I just hope I can do them justice. Sirius is definitely determined to figure Hermione out. He's just a little more aware of her than the others. You'll have to wait and see what happens! ;)

I'm getting ready to post the next chapter, so keep on the lookout for that!

Thanks again!

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Review #16, by Chemical_Pixie Chapter 2

30th April 2017:
What a big time jump for Hermione!

I am a fan. I like how you use specific chapters from HP in your disclaimer. Very professional.

Also, your descriptions and characterizations are good. I like the interaction between Hermione and Dumbledore, and it will be interesting to see how she'll interact with the Marauders!

Author's Response: Hey thanks! Writing Hermione's interactions with the marauders is proving harder than I thought. I hope I can do them justice.

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Review #17, by Chemical_Pixie Chapter 1

30th April 2017:
BBHP! I just saw that you posted a story on here, too, and I thought that I'd give it a read. I'm glad that I did. I'm looking forward to what comes next; this will be a very fun read!

Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for giving my little story a read. I don't claim to be anywhere near as good of a writer as you, so for you to take the time to check out my stuff is pretty cool. Thanks!

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Review #18, by Cheo Chapter 1

11th April 2017:
Looks like it will be a good idea, looking
Forward to seeing how this turns out.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!

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