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Review #1, by AbraxanUnicorn The Dueling Class

23rd March 2017:
Blimey! Asta is one supercool and very tough cookie. I'm not sure I'd ever want to cross her. For a seventeen year old, she's very assured and an accomplished fighter. It certainly appears that she has quite a history back in Sweden if her duelling skills are anything to go by.

I wonder how it will have all gone down with James, and what happens between them next?

Asta was REALLY rude to the professor; she was lucky not to lose more marks!

Looking forward to the next update. You're on a roll with published chapters at the moment!

Brax X

Author's Response: Yeah, Asta's a weird one. She's got a lot of talent and a lot of practice -- more than the average seventeen year old -- but it's not all for good reasons. She's a very complex character and if I'm being honest, I don't entirely understand her yet, but she's definitely fun to write!

I am going to be slowing down with publishing chapters for a bit because of school and work and I'm trying to get a yoga instructor's certification, so this roll won't continue unfortunately. I don't know exactly when I'll post the next chapter, but hopefully it will be soon!
xoxo TheBlondeOne

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Review #2, by GinnyPotter29 A Fresh Start

21st March 2017:
I love the start to this story and found it through your other, the way lady luck dances. Please update both soon I really love your writing style it is very intriguing and you create such mesmerising intricate characters! Can't wait to seen what happens next in both stories!! Love it so much!!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the stories! I have one chapter for Vackra Varelser in the queue and another chapter of TWLLD waiting to go up after that, so you won't have to wait long. Thank you so much for the compliments!
xoxo TheBlondeOne

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Review #3, by AbraxanUnicorn A Fresh Start

16th March 2017:
Hello :)

Firstly, I want to say how impressed I am by your use of different languages in your stories!

Secondly, this looks like a really, really good start to a story. Asta already intrigues me; she has come across as quite cool/aloof, but there seems to be a very intelligent and quick-witted person beneath that exterior. I'm very curious as to what she got up to at Durmstrang, and what happened in Sweden.

This chapter is well-written and very readable. I can't wait to see what the next instalment brings :)

Brax X

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this second review! I'm definitely excited for this story as well; it's going to have the most intrigue and politic-y stuff of any story I've ever written. I'm so glad you like it!

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