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Review #1, by dreamgazer220 Healing Wounds

13th February 2017:
Hello!

SO I was going to get mad at you FOR BREAKING MY HEART and killing off Seamus, but I may have done the same thing in one of my stories, so... ;) BUT STILL.

Also, I'm here with your requested review!

I loved your opening paragraph. It really drew me in and told me that something wasn't right with Dean, even if you didn't come out and say it. I also loved the minor switch when you mentioned "You would notice". I don't know why, but it did really seem to fit the moment. :)

And let's talk about that flashback! Poor Dean :( :( He just wants to pick up and fight again, but there's Seamus, and then he was yelling at him, and it was seriously heart-wrenching. Since you asked about believability in your request, I'm going to say here that you don't have to worry about that. Especially in a war, death can happen to anyone. *snuggles Dean*

I also loved how bitter Dean was about Ginny. I mean, most fics, I feel like, refer to Ginny's feelings about Dean, but it was a nice change to see his feelings about her. And if she was snogging Harry all over the place, it's definitely valid for him to be bitter and jealous; especially after everything he'd been through and feeling like everyone left him behind.

And that's why I love Luna, because of course she would be the one to notice. It just makes sense to me, even though I've never read a Dean/Luna fic before. But the way it works here is very believable- and I chuckled when she just went down to lunch even though Dean had kissed her. And I wanted to strangle Dean a bit for thinking about Ginny while kissing Luna, but I also think that makes it a bit more believable, too, especially given his bitterness earlier.

One thing I would have loved to see a little more of is the development between Dean and Luna. You mention them at Malfoy Manor and somewhat becoming friends - what did they talk about? Or was it just that they were the only two they recognized and it was a dark time? I feel like if you gave a little more backstory there, it would add so much more to this already great fic.

The kiss itself was sweet. It did seem a bit out of place, but I feel like it also worked for the pairing, and I'm curious to see if they wanted to pursue a possible relationship :P But it was also nice that you didn't laminate too much on the kiss - does that make sense?

Anyway, as you can probably tell, I think you did a nice job with this. And thanks for the request!

♥Jill

Author's Response: Hi :D

Well I'm glad the story is at least believable. I feel like if anyone was to be the comforter, it would definitely be Luna. She's a genuinely kind person and just seems to understand people really well, you know? And yes, I almost cried while writing the flashback scene :'-(

As for the kiss...we'll I've never been much good at writing scenes like that :/ But now that you've mentioned it, I might write a little prequel to this about them being at Malfoy Manor ;)

Anyway, thanks so much for your lovely review :)


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Review #2, by AlwaysAddicted Healing Wounds

7th February 2017:
Aw this was adorable. I loved it, even though you made my poor heart break while reading about Dean yelling at Seamus to wake up. Honestly it was heart wrenching. Well done xx

Author's Response: Emotional was pretty much what I was going for, so I'm glad it came across alright. Thanks so much for reviewing :D

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