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Reading Reviews for Twenty Eight Turns
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by PendleWizard Chapter 4: Birthdays

12th October 2017:
A hugely entertaining chapter. I loved the little scene between Bella and Mina, with the hissed death threat and then acting as if they'd been swapping pleasantries. Something tells me Bellaxtrix has just met her match!

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Review #2, by td Chapter 3: Sisterhood

29th July 2017:
I love this story!! Please write more..

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Review #3, by Meg Chapter 3: Sisterhood

12th July 2017:
This is really really good, I sincerely hope that you plan on writing more it is a good story and I would like to hear more of it!!

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Review #4, by PendleWizard Chapter 3: Sisterhood

27th May 2017:
I'm greatly enjoying this. I especially like the idea that Mina is going to get back to 1998 by aging rather than time-travel and I'm looking forward to seeing how that develops.

I'm not sure I'd relish being 10 again!

Is James adopted, too?

One small point: The Euro didn't exist in 1970 - France used the Franc.

Author's Response: I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far! I don't think many of us would want to relive puberty, but I think she would have a bit more reason to than we would.
James isn't adopted, he was born to Euphemia and Fleamont, but the Seer predicted the twins because she could see them at 11 where they were blood relatives.
Thank you for pointing that out! I'll make sure to fix that. I probably wouldn't be able to update the corrections on this site for a while.
I hope you have a lovely day! Sorry for the late reply.

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Review #5, by Kelly Chapter 2

19th February 2017:
This is really good. Can't wait to read more! Keep it up :)

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Review #6, by GeekMom13 Chapter 1: The Beginning

12th February 2017:
Excellent start! I love your writing and look forward to this story

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